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Chapter 3 has been submitted- I decided to have the stepdaughter fill in hostessing the poker night.
 
If putting a story to bed at a certain point seems natural then that's what you should do rather than draw things out UNnaturally and inflict yawns on your readership.

Maybe it's the short story lover in me which is speaking but I have never seen any mileage in taking things beyond that 'point', no matter how much further potential there might be in characters and situation.

You always have the option to pen a follow up/sequel if you wish to explore whatever you think might be missing.
 
Chapter 3 (the poker party) is now posted.
Now thinking about ch 4. Thinking stepdaughter brings over a friend, but not sure how that is filling in.
Another possibility is it is Dad that goes on a trip, and stepdaughter has to fill in for him with Mom. But I always find lesbian sex challenging.
Or stepdaughter could bring a bf over for Mom, but how is that "filling in"?
 
Thinking about Chapter 4 again. Keep going back to they idea of the stepdaughter's bff joining in, but how does it fit the title?
Or do I cover it off in the description line: "This time, her bff fills in."
 
Just submitted another story, non-incest. So am comfortable going back to post another incest story. Hope to start writing Chapter 4 tomorrow (why waste a holiday), so would be happy for any suggestions anybody might have...
 
sirhugs said:
Just submitted another story, non-incest. So am comfortable going back to post another incest story. Hope to start writing Chapter 4 tomorrow (why waste a holiday), so would be happy for any suggestions anybody might have...
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Stepdaughter brings over her bff to surprise her stepfather with a threesome.
The thing is, the bff is a virgin that never had a boyfriend, because she is secretly in love with stepdaughter, but still struggling with her sexuality.
That same secret love does cause her to go along with anything stepdaughter suggests, including the threesome. Losing her virginity to her bff's stepfather is a a price she is willing to pay if that means she gets to play with stepdaughter as well.

That's what came to mind for me.
 
Usually, my first effort on a story creates about 200 words, then it has to marinate. Still early the first morning, and I am in excess of 2100 words on this piece.
I have borrowed and adapted some of nightscream's thoughts.
 
I have had an idea about this thread. And this is a very short synopsis of the idea.
Wife 36 very attractive a who is sex mad she and her husband have a fantastic sex life but she is always wanting more. After one very energetic session the husband Leroy joked about whoreimg her out.
After some time and another sucking of his cock. She ask how much he would pay for her per hour.
They talk about it and she convinces him to look into it. He dose as she asks and works out a system that they would work to.

They have a daughter at college, whe she returns mom and dad find out why she was kicked out of college? It turns out she is just as much of a whore as her mom is and when her mom decided she wanted a night off there 20 year old daughter takes her place and starts her new career.
 
KindredFlame said:
I have had an idea about this thread. And this is a very short synopsis of the idea.
Wife 36 very attractive a who is sex mad she and her husband have a fantastic sex life but she is always wanting more. After one very energetic session the husband Leroy joked about whoreimg her out.
After some time and another sucking of his cock. She ask how much he would pay for her per hour.
They talk about it and she convinces him to look into it. He dose as she asks and works out a system that they would work to.

They have a daughter at college, whe she returns mom and dad find out why she was kicked out of college? It turns out she is just as much of a whore as her mom is and when her mom decided she wanted a night off there 20 year old daughter takes her place and starts her new career.
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Call it, 'Husband, Daddy, Pimp'.
 
KindredFlame said:
I have had an idea about this thread. And this is a very short synopsis of the idea.
Wife 36 very attractive a who is sex mad she and her husband have a fantastic sex life but she is always wanting more. After one very energetic session the husband Leroy joked about whoreimg her out.
After some time and another sucking of his cock. She ask how much he would pay for her per hour.
They talk about it and she convinces him to look into it. He dose as she asks and works out a system that they would work to.

They have a daughter at college, whe she returns mom and dad find out why she was kicked out of college? It turns out she is just as much of a whore as her mom is and when her mom decided she wanted a night off there 20 year old daughter takes her place and starts her new career.
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It wouldn't fit what is already established in my series, but could work as a freestanding story that does not plagiarize my work.
 
Nightscream89 said:
Stepdaughter brings over her bff to surprise her stepfather with a threesome.
The thing is, the bff is a virgin that never had a boyfriend, because she is secretly in love with stepdaughter, but still struggling with her sexuality.
That same secret love does cause her to go along with anything stepdaughter suggests, including the threesome. Losing her virginity to her bff's stepfather is a a price she is willing to pay if that means she gets to play with stepdaughter as well.

That's what came to mind for me.
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I have sort of reversed this in the draft I am working on- the galpal is eager to be deflowered, but has thought she was straight. The stepdaughter has already enjoyed girl-on-girl play in 3ways with Mom & stepdad. We know from the earlier stories that she is eager & assertive. I am just at the stage where the threesome are naked in bed together working out what goes where. I hope it works out to your satisfaction. Thanks for the suggestion- it inspired me to add the twist.
 
sirhugs said:
I have sort of reversed this in the draft I am working on- the galpal is eager to be deflowered, but has thought she was straight. The stepdaughter has already enjoyed girl-on-girl play in 3ways with Mom & stepdad. We know from the earlier stories that she is eager & assertive. I am just at the stage where the threesome are naked in bed together working out what goes where. I hope it works out to your satisfaction. Thanks for the suggestion- it inspired me to add the twist.
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No problem, I enjoy giving suggestions.
I think the most important thing is to have distinct differences between the bff and the stepdaughter. She needs an own personality, so it's not just a rinse and repeat of the first two chapters, but it feels like an addition to the story with an actual new character.
Sounds logical but I have read a lot of stories that introduce carbon copies personality wise of other characters. (Describing a different appearance isn't enough in my opinion.
 
Chapter 4 is drafted. Starting to think about Chapter 5 (should there be a chapter 5?)
I have an idea what it could be, but looking for fresh ideas so that I don't repeat myself.
 
a befriended couple has trouble conceiving a child, wife offers to be a surrugate, however doctors advice her against it due to her age. So once again Stepdaughter fills in and agrees to become the surrogate, of course conceiving will go the natural way.
Stepdad realizes now that he would like a child of his own, however since stepdaughters womb is now promised to the friend, her bff will happily let stepdad breed her.

All the guys come over, stepdad breeds the bff while stepdaughter is being bred by the friend. The other guys of course can't fuck the girls unprotected pussies but their mouths and assholes are free to use.
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Or, exploring their sexuality further. Stepdad and his wife have signed up for a sexclub. Wife has signed up for a auction like event where she will be sold to the highest bidder(s) for the night while stepdad is putting some bids in of his own. However they looked at the schedule wrong, wife is on a business trip that day, so stepdaughter will need to fill in once again.
Or it could be a different event she signed up for, maybe she agreed to be put in a stockade at a sex party for free use and stepdaughter has to fill in.

Kinda whatever fetish you want to write about.

I would introduce something new though, and you already added a new character with the bff, so I wouldn't go for that again. A new fetish feels like the logical next step. Like the examples I gave here (breeding, free use).

If you want to introduce another character (maybe a guy from stepdaughter's school?) I would save that for chapter 6.
 
Nightscream89 said:
a befriended couple has trouble conceiving a child, wife offers to be a surrugate, however doctors advice her against it due to her age. So once again Stepdaughter fills in and agrees to become the surrogate, of course conceiving will go the natural way.
Stepdad realizes now that he would like a child of his own, however since stepdaughters womb is now promised to the friend, her bff will happily let stepdad breed her.

All the guys come over, stepdad breeds the bff while stepdaughter is being bred by the friend. The other guys of course can't fuck the girls unprotected pussies but their mouths and assholes are free to use.
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Or, exploring their sexuality further. Stepdad and his wife have signed up for a sexclub. Wife has signed up for a auction like event where she will be sold to the highest bidder(s) for the night while stepdad is putting some bids in of his own. However they looked at the schedule wrong, wife is on a business trip that day, so stepdaughter will need to fill in once again.
Or it could be a different event she signed up for, maybe she agreed to be put in a stockade at a sex party for free use and stepdaughter has to fill in.

Kinda whatever fetish you want to write about.

I would introduce something new though, and you already added a new character with the bff, so I wouldn't go for that again. A new fetish feels like the logical next step. Like the examples I gave here (breeding, free use).

If you want to introduce another character (maybe a guy from stepdaughter's school?) I would save that for chapter 6.
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I take it that you don't think I ought to have Luna(the bff) & Linda seduce Luna's father [and mother?] possibly leading to an orgy including both sets of parents? Too "done before"?
 
sirhugs said:
I take it that you don't think I ought to have Luna(the bff) & Linda seduce Luna's father [and mother?] possibly leading to an orgy including both sets of parents? Too "done before"?
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I wouldn't say it's 'too done before'. Especially in a multi-chapter story, the fact that the characters we already know experience it makes it already more compelling in my opinion. But I would do it in a later chapter rather than immediately after introducing the bff, maybe hint at it a bit in the next chapter but actually put it in chapter 7 or something, I feel like this will give it a bit more build up and gives the feeling of multiple 'story-arcs' and character developments running simultaniously which makes the story a bit more alive, at least for me.

Think of it like this, after introducing the bff, would all sexual encounters of the family now be focused on the bff realistically? I don't think so. So show the reader that even though the bff is now involved, other things still happen as well, even though she can be a part of the other sexual encounters as well now, she doesn't need to be the focus point of those encounters.

I hope you get what I mean, sort of difficult to explain.
 
Nightscream89 said:
a befriended couple has trouble conceiving a child, wife offers to be a surrugate, however doctors advice her against it due to her age. So once again Stepdaughter fills in and agrees to become the surrogate, of course conceiving will go the natural way.
Stepdad realizes now that he would like a child of his own, however since stepdaughters womb is now promised to the friend, her bff will happily let stepdad breed her.

All the guys come over, stepdad breeds the bff while stepdaughter is being bred by the friend. The other guys of course can't fuck the girls unprotected pussies but their mouths and assholes are free to use.
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Or, exploring their sexuality further. Stepdad and his wife have signed up for a sexclub. Wife has signed up for a auction like event where she will be sold to the highest bidder(s) for the night while stepdad is putting some bids in of his own. However they looked at the schedule wrong, wife is on a business trip that day, so stepdaughter will need to fill in once again.
Or it could be a different event she signed up for, maybe she agreed to be put in a stockade at a sex party for free use and stepdaughter has to fill in.

Kinda whatever fetish you want to write about.

I would introduce something new though, and you already added a new character with the bff, so I wouldn't go for that again. A new fetish feels like the logical next step. Like the examples I gave here (breeding, free use).

If you want to introduce another character (maybe a guy from stepdaughter's school?) I would save that for chapter 6.
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not sure I plan to take this to chapter 7. But then I never started out thinking about chapter 4 or 5.
 
Chapter 4 has been submitted. Nameless Narrator with Stepdaughter & her galpal. Mom arrives just at the end.
Two unrelated stories in the pipeline (if they work out) so time to think about whether there is a chapter 5.

If so, is it just Mom with the three from Ch 4?
Or...
Do I bring in a teacher?
A bf for the stepdaughter?
A bf for the wife?
Does the galpal disappear (though I foreshadowed anal sex with her in ch 4)?
 
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