I am looking for a beta reader for my latest story, ' Coming Clean.'

[UnpublishedEroticaWriter]

It had another name when I first had the idea long ago, but times have changed. It's mostly about people coming clean. A name suggested by one of my editors. So, I'm looking for someone who will let me know if it has any inconsistencies, poor word choices, repetitiveness, or anything else that needs to be addressed. It's 4547 words. It's about a threesome relationship involving a straight male, a bi-girl, and a lesbian. It's an erotic comedy with twists all the way to the end.

 

[PennyThompson]

Short-form pansexual erotic comedy is kind of my jam

I'm still a fairly new writer, and I've never done a beta read before, but I've had some amazing readers help me already, so I'd love to pay it forward!

 

[UnpublishedEroticaWriter]

Short-form pansexual erotic comedy is kind of my jam

I'm still a fairly new writer, and I've never done a beta read before, but I've had some amazing readers help me already, so I'd love to pay it forward!

OK, I can send you a Google Docs link if that works for you.