Hypoxia
doesn't watch television
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For me, involving money for sex is not really my thing and kind of cheapens the story.
I'd say that it cheapens the characters, not the story, which is enriched by emotional complexity -- the characters now must think about money, and their attitudes and reactions. I see possibilities here for numerous alternative stories, maybe branching-path accounts. Which is most plausible, or tragic, or hottest?