OrdinaryPerson
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Hi. I have a short story I'd like to have someone read through before posting. I tried to message a couple of people on the volunteer editor list and got error messages.
The story is about 2400 words. Not much of a plot. It is a scene where a man sets up his female partner with a blind date and watches while controlling a remote vibe then takes his partner home.
I’d like to get an opinion on whether the story flows well, its general sexiness (or not), and if everything makes sense. I kind of hate proof reading so I would also appreciate an edit for grammar and structure.
Please PM me if you would be kind enough to give my story an edit. I'd like to write some longer pieces in the future so it would be great to find someone I could also potentially bounce ideas off of for story and character development, but not a requirement. Thank you for your time in reading this.
Hi. I have a short story I'd like to have someone read through before posting. I tried to message a couple of people on the volunteer editor list and got error messages.
The story is about 2400 words. Not much of a plot. It is a scene where a man sets up his female partner with a blind date and watches while controlling a remote vibe then takes his partner home.
I’d like to get an opinion on whether the story flows well, its general sexiness (or not), and if everything makes sense. I kind of hate proof reading so I would also appreciate an edit for grammar and structure.
Please PM me if you would be kind enough to give my story an edit. I'd like to write some longer pieces in the future so it would be great to find someone I could also potentially bounce ideas off of for story and character development, but not a requirement. Thank you for your time in reading this.
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