Story:A boy at a girls school

A girls boarding school allows boys in for the first time. You are one of the lucky few to join.
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Point of view:2nd person(male)
First name=boy
Last name=girl(his best friend)
Deepest thread:42
Total threads:364
Number of authors:96
 
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I think if you use the immersive text, it makes sense.

"You can come here tonight at 8pm, and I'll have {LAST_NAME} here."
 
Went there, & thought I found a pronoun ("here" I think means "her" due to context) that I didn't know what it was referring to. Read prev. thread, & still no ideas.

I think you didn't hit the front page that sets up your immersion text.
 
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