Seeking open minded woman to review a poem...

[The3Ps]

Hi there,

I'm a long time reader and two year member here on Lit. I have made some nice friends. I wrote a poem and would feel comfortable if a somewhat kinky, fetish embracing woman would read it before I post it on Lit. Please be open minded, non judgemental and cool. PM if you'd like to advise me. Thanks in advance!!

 

[Slinky_Pink]

Hi. . I'm a very open minded female with experience in most fetishes. . I'm happy to help if I can . . X

 

[HarryHill]

Hi. . I'm a very open minded female with experience in most fetishes. . I'm happy to help if I can . . X

Did he pm two weeks ago,
tell you of his kinks,
entice you with his eloquence,
did your cheeks turn pink,
flush with disgust or passion,
tell him what you think?

:note: It's been a slow day.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Did he pm two weeks ago,
tell you of his kinks,
entice you with his eloquence,
did your cheeks turn pink,
flush with disgust or passion,
tell him what you think?

:note: It's been a slow day.

I've been tempted to do something similar ever since the OP Posted.

 

[HarryHill]

I've been tempted to do something similar ever since the OP Posted.

Would you be so kind as to tell me what AWTSS stands for? bty I checked the OP on search, no poems or stories yet.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

AWTSS dates back to my days on the General Board where I got the rep for being a shit-stirrer - can't think why. It stands for Always With The Stir Stick after someone's comment, can't remember who it was - Heavystick? BobBitchin(sp)? eagleyes? Not sure.
I'm not surprised to hear that the OP has not contributed......yet.

 

[butters]

AWTSS dates back to my days on the General Board where I got the rep for being a shit-stirrer - can't think why. It stands for Always With The Stir Stick after someone's comment, can't remember who it was - Heavystick? Bob? eagleyes? Not sure.
I'm not surprised to hear that the OP has not contributed......yet.

sounds like an aj-esque comment. i think i recall seeing it but can't recall the author

 

[Slinky_Pink]

Did he pm two weeks ago,
tell you of his kinks,
entice you with his eloquence,
did your cheeks turn pink,
flush with disgust or passion,
tell him what you think?

:note: It's been a slow day.

Cheeks flushed with heat,
Reason as yet unknown?
A well worded private message?
A stirred curiosity now grown?
A enticing sexual alure maybe?
Line now cast, bait now thrown. .

S.P

 

[Tzara]

Review of an Unread Erotic Poem

A scandalous brief story, this,
Of vile abuse of one young Miss
By one whose lust's a dark abyss
Of desperation, seeking bliss.

With leathern thongs he binds her wrists;
Her body strains and shakes and shifts
While he with probing parts insists
She yield all in satanic tryst.

But once his need (and hers!) is spent
She wears her welts like ornaments,
For all was done with her consent.
He is, you know, a proper gent.

 

[HarryHill]

AWTSS dates back to my days on the General Board where I got the rep for being a shit-stirrer - can't think why. It stands for Always With The Stir Stick after someone's comment, can't remember who it was - Heavystick? BobBitchin(sp)? eagleyes? Not sure.
I'm not surprised to hear that the OP has not contributed......yet.

I thought it was one of those IYKYK things like you know A Willing Tran-Sexual Slave. GP the shit stirrer? Hmnn... I am surprised too. What cheek.

 

[HarryHill]

Cheeks flushed with heat,
Reason as yet unknown?
A well worded private message?
A stirred curiosity now grown?
A enticing sexual alure maybe?
Line now cast, bait now thrown. .

S.P

Eyes down.
No frown.
No pics?
Curiosity killed the cat. Satisfaction brought 'em back. (unknown)
See number 3.
You didn't follow instruction and PM the OP?

 

[HarryHill]

Review of an Unread Erotic Poem

A scandalous brief story, this,
Of vile abuse of one young Miss
By one whose lust's a dark abyss
Of desperation, seeking bliss.

With leathern thongs he binds her wrists;
Her body strains and shakes and shifts
While he with probing parts insists
She yield all in satanic tryst.

But once his need (and hers!) is spent
She wears her welts like ornaments,
For all was done with her consent.
He is, you know, a proper gent.

That might be a little bit more than her profile suggests.

They stepped into the crowded bar,
old man with a babe in tow,
she in T and leather pants,
hidden bits protruding.

 

[HarryHill]

That might be a little bit more than her profile suggests.

They stepped into the crowded bar,
old man with a babe in tow,
she in T and leather pants,
hidden bits protruding.

The eyes in this rowdy place,
followed her one step apace,
from he with sight just for,
an empty barstool and spirits.

 

[HeavyStick]

AWTSS dates back to my days on the General Board where I got the rep for being a shit-stirrer - can't think why. It stands for Always With The Stir Stick after someone's comment, can't remember who it was - Heavystick? BobBitchin(sp)? eagleyes? Not sure.
I'm not surprised to hear that the OP has not contributed......yet.

Wasn't me

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Well, a blast from the past! Merry Mishmash and Happy Nude Year stranger.

 

[Mrtenant]

Where be the lady fair?
Hiding out away from here
How will she know
Which way to go
Why do we even care?