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[My Erotic Tail]

Wylde~

Hearlds of the Dying Age Ch 01
By WyldeKarde

Wow Wylde this is a great start in the ...
Novels catagorie ! Mysterious and Intriguing..
I will follow this story now that youv'e got me hooked
as to where its going. ...smile...

Let me add Erotic and exotic~
The roughness and intense mood set was
an edge of the seat type read. Just the kind
I like...and a word wizard you are. I was delighted
to read this and look forward to the next chapter.

Looking to see if I might find me a couple of
blackbirds...yummy. I would trade places with
Caleb...but then again where is this leading...hehehe

Thanks again...Art

 

[Guest]

Thanks Tail...

I appreciate the kind review and there will be another installment in Caleb's ongoing adventures very soon. Given the time it takes to post them however, there may be a different story up before then. It falls under the category of older woman/younger man (whatever that's called on lit, I haven't checked yet). Either way, I'm still writing and there'll be no shortage of stories from my corner of lit anytime soon.

P.S.

Having read your quotes in your signature, I've got another I think you might like. It doesn't really fit a writer but it hung on the walls of my Dojo as a child and I like it. I think Caleb would like it to, if he'd been born a Herald instead of having been thrown into the role.

~ Civilize the mind, make savage the body ~

Mao Tse Tung

 

[Guest]

Lord of the Rings: Elivish Invasion

ya know some days your just not sure about your own darn writing.

 

[MLyons]

It was posted a little less than a month ago now, but my first story here is:

Cindy: The Professor's Bane Ch. 01

It's a story that pretty much embodies the kind of role-reversal I've always wanted to see in opposition to the traditionally male dominated, reluctance/non-consent genre. Cindy, a 19-year-old college freshman blackmails her bitter, somewhat vindictive, and very opportunistic college professor who has a history of exchanging grades for sex with his students. Cindy's true motives are not yet entirely clear, but her uniquely sweet yet ruthless brand of sexual humiliation and tease are the first order of the day, and there is more to come as the story unfolds.

For those who are interested, Chapter 2 of this story has been submitted, and will likley be posted in another day or two.

 

[RHS71!]

nice story Crim.

a little bit of country, and not much rock and roll
but well written with good imagery.

 

[RHS71!]

Heralds of the Dying Age rocks!

Wylde one,

Nice job; you must write for a living! While some of your stories are a little too dark for my normal fare, this latest one really pulls the reader in; I read the older ones over and was surprised to see the same characters all over the place - is it really the same universe?

I realize it's faint praise, but I've paid a lot for worse stories and poorer writing. Looking forward to the rest of the tale - and hoping it's a very long one.

 

[Guest]

oopsie

 

[Guest]

Ok, my latest submission is up. The Worst Chain Story Ever Ch. 07 has now been posted. Give it a read. You really don't have to read the previous ones to understand it. Oh, and don't forget! It's supposed to be bad!

 

[jthserra]

A hot dear abbie letter...

Some interesting correspondence about an aggressive librarian:

Dear Abbie (hot times in a library) .


thanks,

jim : )

 

[CollegeGuy4OlderF]

Ive written a few stories, some of them are posted on here, but I have been hesitant to post any of my recent stories because I have had mixed reviews. I would love to hear some feedback and any suggestions yall may have!

 

[Black Tulip]

Ive written a few stories, some of them are posted on here, but I have been hesitant to post any of my recent stories because I have had mixed reviews. I would love to hear some feedback and any suggestions yall may have!

Why don't you come over to the Story Discussion Circle? I can recommend it for thorough advice on improving your writing.

 

[CollegeGuy4OlderF]

ill do that...thanks

 

[Guest]

My newest story, Passion Unveiled, has now been posted. It's a heartfelt letter from a woman to her long distance lover.

 

[wishfulthinking]

Hi guys, chapter 7 of innocent pawn is up. At the end of the last chapter Bella and Leonn were set upon by her father's men.

PS nothing bad happens to Bella or Leonn. This is a love story after all!

 

[wishfulthinking]

PS Crim, I love your new look! Reminds me of gorgeous old cars and headscarfs!

 

[herecomestherain]

Crimson Maiden wrote

My newest story, Passion Unveiled, has now been posted. It's a heartfelt letter from a woman to her long distance lover.

Lovely story Crim, made me feel a bit wistful, it moved me in just the right way, well done.

 

[herecomestherain]

Crimson Maiden wrote

My newest story, Passion Unveiled, has now been posted. It's a heartfelt letter from a woman to her long distance lover.

Lovely story Crim, made me feel a bit wistful, it moved me in just the right way, well done.

 

[Rob Conner]

Don't be discouraged

Hello all.
My first venture into this dark new world.

I've been writing for awhile and have several stories posted here.

To you new authors, Don't be discouraged by the comments from others. Some are fustrated writers who can't get posted and take their wrath out on those who do.

Some of the others are puncuation and spelling freaks. One mispelled word and the trash you. They can deduct something from my pay if they don't like it!

The ones who count are those who give constructive critism and sign their names to it. This is a place to practice and learn about the ART of writing. (Yes it's an ART not a science.) Use it. Allow those who will to help.

BUT*** The Most Important Thing Is***** HAVE FUN!!!

That's what it's all about.

Rob Conners

 

[sachiaiko]

New story

VERY excited about my new story! Though its rather long

Its in the Gay Male Catagory, so all you straight fellas keep your noses out, unless you're thinking about changing teams and enjoy gay erotica And i know some of you straight boys do!

Its got a fantasy base, meaning, it probably could have gone in NonHuman or SciFi, since the characters are sort of Angelic. Its the sequel to my "A Ghost Of a Chance" But it stands alone if you dont want to read A Ghost of a Chance.

This isnt quick porn, its a love story, its long and fun. So those of you looking to get into a good in depth story. Seek here!!

The link below --

Angelic Salvation

I am really proud of this story, and i already have been getting some responses that have been excelent. The characters mean alot to me, I have sort of fallen in love with them over the last 50+ pages. So, I hope i put them down on paper in a way you all could fall in love with them too.

Thanks for taking a peek! I hope some of you enjoy it!

Nik

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Matt Danger Chapter 1.5

Not a sequel, not a prequel, this is I guess a mid-quel.

I had to lengthen my "Matt Danger and the Case of the Bound Angel" serial novel, so I wrote a chapter one-and-a-half. It involves Matt's BDSM encounter with Miyoko, a Japanese-American marimba-playing landscape limnologist. What else can I say?

Here's a link

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=140793

---dr.M.

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Hawk and a Dove 2

Hey Doc~


The word wizards tale...
I'll have to admit I didn't know what a
couple of those words meant...but damn
they made it that much more exotic...smiles
Being a fan of Matt Danger I have to say
this was another fine addition..wow,,hehehe
I want to write like you when i grow up...lol
Nice as always...thanks..

My second part which is actually a story
in itself posted right under the Doc's~

Hawk and a Dove 2

Its not the kind of tale where you have to
read part one to get a story from it ..it can
stand alone just using the same charactors
as the first. Only it just makes a great addition
and I will have to do more for I am told this tale
is extremely good and of course I think so too...enjoy

Hey Rob Conner
I couldn't get your text to open not sure what
your wanting to do with it but PM me and I'll
hook ya up with a link if thats what you want.???

 

[Guest]

Matt Danger and the Case of the Bound Angel

by Doctor M



I usually kick off reviews by touching on things the author could have done to either improve their work or to place more of themselves in it. In the case of this story, it's apparent almost from the first sentence that the author is in familiar territory and the reader is along for the ride.

The writing style is so suited to the story, and vice versa that pointing out flaws or missteps is nearly impossible. I generally only point out those things in a story that make me stop reading. If it's a smooth ride, I just keep on going until I hit the voting bar.

The ride was smooth, and the sex was intense. I usually don't critque the sex because that's the most objective part of a story. In pointing out one specific thing that I liked, it was that the style of writing moved along at a swift clip when I wanted it to. If a gorgeous woman is sitting naked in an antique loveseat, I want to hear about the girl, not the amusing anecdote about how grandma got the chair half-price at auction. A lot of writers, myself included, get too caught up in our little make-belive worlds to realize that not every aspect of the world is interesting to a reader.

Well, all in all, it was a good story and it gets a solid 5 from me.

Le Peace, Le Chill

- Wyld -

 

[alias_the_archangel]

New Stuff

I've recently added a few stories, including "More the Merrier" (and Ch. 2) & "Showerhead".

I'd like to state that I wrote "Showerhead" as a response to a challenge. The challenge given to me was to write a story about a female in the shower with no toys, and it had to be in first-person perspective. I, being male, therefore had to attempt to get into the psyche of a woman alone. If you're interested, please feel free to check it out using the link at the bottom of the post and let me know what you think!

I'd love to hear feedback and possibly more challenges for storylines.

 

[tn_greeneyez]

One more try

Gonna try this again. Would love feedback!


http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=301008http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=301008

 

[RHS71!]

Re: A Loving Wives story

with a bit of a different twist: Best Friends . Take a peek if you get a chance.


jim : )

Very nice! Hope it is the start of a looong story, so we can watch the wifey squirm and squirm...