SeattleRain
Literotica Guru
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- Jan 27, 2004
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Hey Sexy Poets, and good morning.
I don't know what caused this testesterone invasion, but these shores are certainly open for the docking!
mistress anna asked me to do reviews this morning, and i have to pretend to be submissive, part of my charm.
Starting from the top, hey I like this flyguy, anyone know if he is married?
Seriously, he brings us a serious poem today, a must read indeed. Ghost House This poet stops to watch death approach his neighbors house, he is on the outside, but his heart is inside with them. This poet does not spell out what is happening, he makes us see it with his descriptions.
Awhile back, there was a thread about this, here is a lesson..
he could have said.
"The relatives come from all over the country to wait for my neighbor to die." but he is too smart for that.
I am going to be here all day. Too many good poems.
Ancient117331 ©
Kodacolor Momemts
Take a look. Here is a tease.
Catbabe brings us
Wind Walking
Do you think that her skills of the line break is something that can be taught? Teach me teach me! Please!
Check these out: by xxxkaliaxxx
Very hot.
Sacred Symphony
I seek madness
I seek madness
by xxxkaliaxxx ©
I am sure that kalia will get what she seeks, seems like that kind of girl! Just keep writing like this, sweetheart, and you will surely get something
I would have liked a little punctuation (I always hated when people told me this, but I have finally accepted it) to be able to take a breath
Okay, with this one by jd4george I am not sure whether to be aroused or confused. I guess there is room for both.
Sculpture: Genesis, Book One
something about chasms of bubbling magma....
seriously, an interesting read on creation.. check it out
Next --
The Bandits Bleed
by PatCarrington ©
all I can do is say, wow this guy is talented and show you his words back. I dare you not to read this poem after you read this:
Welcome to the Machine
by hippiedude ©
made me sweat a little bit. going to look for some construction sites when I am finished reviews.
You gotta read this one. It is such a man poem, but a sensitive, intelligent man poem. God I love it.
Final Movement
Okay I am posting this, be back, many more to come
edited to say Who the hell put that freaky boobie on my AV?????
annaswirls went back to work. She has the delight of meeting adult people on this thing called a "lunch break"
Not the writers best but wouldn't want to do a review without mentioning my sweet mistress.
preach and practice
HEY Uncle Pervey has a poem without mention of eating young girls pussies and assholes!!! (not that there is anything wrong with that, but I like a little variety)
Demigod
okay! Think I am finished.
Remember this is the opinion of one slut who knows nothing about poetry.
If you don't like it, I am sure you are not alone.
Tara will come back with a real review next week. I think.
Oh and if you have more reviews please please add them, I did not do the poems offered today justice.
psst if we are all a little bad, I think Maria will open that spankin school. damn, where is the registrars office. I would like to maintain matriculation....
I don't know what caused this testesterone invasion, but these shores are certainly open for the docking!
mistress anna asked me to do reviews this morning, and i have to pretend to be submissive, part of my charm.
Starting from the top, hey I like this flyguy, anyone know if he is married?
Seriously, he brings us a serious poem today, a must read indeed. Ghost House This poet stops to watch death approach his neighbors house, he is on the outside, but his heart is inside with them. This poet does not spell out what is happening, he makes us see it with his descriptions.
Awhile back, there was a thread about this, here is a lesson..
Out-of-state plates assemble
at the curb,
he could have said.
"The relatives come from all over the country to wait for my neighbor to die." but he is too smart for that.
I am going to be here all day. Too many good poems.
Ancient117331 ©
Kodacolor Momemts
Take a look. Here is a tease.
Love CAN die - by inches
or miles, and people too. And life isn't pretty
Cinderalla dreams of realities come 2AM, or 8AM,
or noon or midnight -
its real - cut-your-heart-out-with-a-dull-spoon
and Sonofabitch expletives...
Catbabe brings us
Wind Walking
Do you think that her skills of the line break is something that can be taught? Teach me teach me! Please!
blind ecstasy blows and shipwrecked
stories soar on winds saturated
with lost sea souls. Their fingers fly
through my hair, spectral touches
that soak through skin, absorbing
the last drops of lingering faith.
Check these out: by xxxkaliaxxx
Very hot.
Sacred Symphony
I seek madness
I seek madness
by xxxkaliaxxx ©
I seek madness
from the night
setting aside sanity
when the hours grow still
I open my eyes
from sleep that brings
neither absolution
nor appeasement
I am sure that kalia will get what she seeks, seems like that kind of girl! Just keep writing like this, sweetheart, and you will surely get something
I would have liked a little punctuation (I always hated when people told me this, but I have finally accepted it) to be able to take a breath
Okay, with this one by jd4george I am not sure whether to be aroused or confused. I guess there is room for both.
Sculpture: Genesis, Book One
until it no longer resembled the world intended
but growing a tail and humanoid form
became a world dangling like a head on a spit
as in that movie with the music by Strauss
“Also Sprach Zarathustra”
the embryo flowed beneath my thumbs
gaining symmetry as mountains disappeared
and chasms bubbled magma
mass moving in tectonic rapture
something about chasms of bubbling magma....
seriously, an interesting read on creation.. check it out
Next --
The Bandits Bleed
by PatCarrington ©
all I can do is say, wow this guy is talented and show you his words back. I dare you not to read this poem after you read this:
I have known you wrapped in blankets
and known you as the wind, how matter
twists around you, orbits of some nuclear
intimacy with heaven.
Welcome to the Machine
by hippiedude ©
made me sweat a little bit. going to look for some construction sites when I am finished reviews.
Feel Earth writhe under heavy machines,
mere permutations of the visceral man,
consummate practice of auto-arousal,
power to which you long to succumb.
You gotta read this one. It is such a man poem, but a sensitive, intelligent man poem. God I love it.
Final Movement
Okay I am posting this, be back, many more to come
edited to say Who the hell put that freaky boobie on my AV?????
annaswirls went back to work. She has the delight of meeting adult people on this thing called a "lunch break"
Not the writers best but wouldn't want to do a review without mentioning my sweet mistress.
preach and practice
HEY Uncle Pervey has a poem without mention of eating young girls pussies and assholes!!! (not that there is anything wrong with that, but I like a little variety)
Demigod
okay! Think I am finished.
Remember this is the opinion of one slut who knows nothing about poetry.
If you don't like it, I am sure you are not alone.
Tara will come back with a real review next week. I think.
Oh and if you have more reviews please please add them, I did not do the poems offered today justice.
psst if we are all a little bad, I think Maria will open that spankin school. damn, where is the registrars office. I would like to maintain matriculation....
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