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Hey, so I have the updated synopsis for my request. Btw, how much closer am I on the list now?
This story would take place in the Dick Tracy comic strip universe. It'd be a noncon/reluc story starring Tess Trueheart-Tracy (the eponymous famous detective's wife) and the Son of the Brow (a minor, C-grade villain, only remarkable for the fact that he's the son of a more famous villain and his main story involved teaming up with his lover, Angeltop, the daughter of another famous villain Flattop, in a "kids avenge the parents scenario). It'd be based off of a short story written I once read in a Dick Tracy anthology.
The original story, in a nutshell, was one focused on Tess, as opposed to Dick, a "day in the limelight" type story. After a family breakfast, after Dick Tracy leaves for work, and their son Joe goes off to school, Tess receives a call from someone hoping to talk to Dick about having him speak at a Crimestoppers Club. Tess offhandedly tells him that Dick will not be home until six, and then goes out to go shopping/catch lunch. While outside, she has a nagging feeling about whether she locked the door or not. When she comes back at around 1, she finds the door locked and signs in relief...until she's confronted by the Son of the Brow, who's there to do the usual "hold her hostage until Dick Tracy comes back so he can kill him" thing, risking it all as he feels he's got nothing else left to live for (getting revenge for his dead GF, Angeltop, who died attempting to kill him in their first story). He was the anonymous caller, had been watching the house, and was able to get in due to her not locking the door after going out. And now knows to expect Tracy at 6, and knows the son Joe will come back from school at 3 as additional leverage. He had found out their house's location when, by chance, he spotted Tess out in the community, recognizing her, and then following her home from a distance.
Here, the story diverges. In the original, Tess and Joe are both captured and subdued, but Dick Tracy comes and saves the day anyways. In the original, Brow comments on how beautiful she is and how Tracy is "one lucky dick", he doesn't try anything with her.
In my vision, when Brow marches her upstairs to tie her up. He's been cool and focused wholly on his task up till now---but then things change as his view point allows him to see an outline of Tess's gorgeous ass through her snugly fitting dress, moving enticingly as she ascends the stairs. So consumed was Brow Jr by the thought of revenge that when making plans, Tess was just one factor to him, one pawn to use. He'd only ever seen off-focus pictures of Tess in newspapers. Now now that he's seen her up close, realizes she's a very beautiful woman, supposedly age 39 but having the looks and body of an 20-something woman in her prime.
It stirs him, and slowly, desire grows within him, as he recalls that he has not had a woman since Angeltop, his one and only relationship (and sexual partner) since his big brow deformity had all the ladies staying away from him. Angeltop, being Flattop's daughter, wasn't exactly a looker either--their relationship was based on love but not on looks, he admits. So he's had some sexual experience, but been without for a while.
All the while during this situation, Tess is doing her usual thing to try: looking for ways to talk her way out of the situation, telling him not to do it, that there's another way. "There's another way" strikes a chord in Brow, only not in the way Tess was hoping for. Seeing Tess in front of him, he sees an opportunity---a bloodless way to get revenge on Tracy much more enticing than his first plan. "Justice," he replies, "your husband took away my lady. I take you, and we're even."
Brow Jr gives this deal to Tess: allow him to fuck her for the next 2 hours, and not only will he walk out of there, but also give up his vendetta with Tracy entirely. If she refuses, he will go with his plan. Tess thinks to herself that she had gotten out of similar situations before, and tries to briefly stall him. Brow, as if reading her mind, adds that even if she got his gun away from him and subdued him, he still knows where they live now, and threatens to sell it to the highest bidder if put in jail. He appeals to her as a wife, mother, and a person---she wouldn't let herself go unharmed if it meant endangering others, would she? Also, if she caves in now, he will leave before Joe's bus comes back, and he will not have to witness anything.
Tess is faced with a situation she never faced in those old-time comics---never has she faced the prospect of being sexually blackmailed and taken by a villain, much less as an ultimatum in exchange for Dick's safety. She has an inner argument when faced with Brow's proposition, but given the immediacy of the situation, and her love for Dick, gives in to his demand.
Main sources of eroticism for this story is the psychological humiliation, and contrast. Here, we have Tess TRUEHEART Tracy, being fucked by another man in her and Dick's own bedroom, and enjoying it immensely. And which villain is it that gets the honor? Not a well-known one, not a crimelord like Big Boy or an prime assassin like Flattop. No, she's taken by Brow Jr, a C-grade villain, a street thug, young and inexperienced, who's failed time and time again when plotting against Tracy. Brow Jr. delights that he's doing something no villain has ever been able to do, and views it as the best revenge revenge possible, surpassing all the other superior criminals in his own way. And like I've already mentioned, he's hideous, while she's the pinnacle of beauty, so the contrast is erotic. Of course, when things get down to it, when he takes her, she can't help but be aroused by his attentions, combining the facts that 1) Dick Tracy being always busy with crimefighting, it has been months since she's had any sexual contact, and 2) His young, virile, animalistic taking of her, while crude, hits all the right spots, long left untouched. Now, she doesn't get into it to the point where it turns fully consensual---but her body and mind is so hazed in pleasure hat that she gets lost in it.
One note: one thing I'd like to see throughout the story is Brow Jr, in his own twisted way, attempting to woo Tess, purely in a lustful matter. He compliments her beauty/body, makes effort to see her pleasured, scorns Dick for not appreciating her body.
Here's some things that'll help get you into the head of Tess and write for her character, and how to semi-plausibly have her fall into lust despite herself. Tess knows that up to a point that she's an attractive woman. But she doesn't seem to be aware that she's drop dead gorgeous by worldly standards. She's sexy without knowing it. She isn't aware that her body is such that it would drop the jaws of men everywhere . This could be due to growing up in a more conservative time to conservative parents...due to Dick Tracy being similarly old fashioned in his views...could be that before and after their marriage, due to his fixation on his work or just aloofness, he never really made her FEEL that way. And of course Dick's friends/coworkers would never express that to her out of respect. Whatever the cause, when Brow starts complimenting her on her body...while part of her is repulsed by the crudeness, another part of her mind perks up, one of validation she never got before but hearing it now, feels...positive. (example: "I....have a great ass?").
And of course...Tess is 39 years old, but about to turn 40 in few months. She's getting up in years. You can probably drop a hint in the beginning of the story about her insecurities about her getting older and losing her attraction. So the notion that this 20 year old young man, from whom she doesn't even expect attraction, expresses her finds her extremely desirable....despite the circumstances surrounding it, this touches something deep inside her.
The beginning of the story should set up/foreshadow Tess's neglect and eventual fall into lust. We start out seeing a house in a nice suburban neighborhood. Spring is here, the sun shining with flowers blooming and birds singing. We get the image of a perfect American home where nothing bad happens. Tess Tracy is alone in her house. She's cleaning up after Dick Tracy and their son Joe after they've left for work and school respectively. We get to look into her thoughts about how she loves her life with her family and wouldn't give it up for the world and do anything protect them (foreshadowing). We see Tess answering the phone (Brow's phone call) and falling for the ruse, a little after Dick leaves for work and Joe for school. After she's finished cleaning up breakfast, she tidies herself up in the bathroom before going out to do lunch with a friend and then grocery shopping after.
At one point, while getting herself ready, she gets a chance to look in the mirror and marvel how well she looks for a 39 year old (just like in the comic books...she still looks like she's in her mid-twenties, no wrinkles, no sag, giving birth did nothing to alter her, etc). But then her thankfulness turns into a sigh, as she recalls how Dick's work doesn't allow for much time spent with her...much less a time to appreciate her still present prime looks....or in the bedroom (more foreshadowing). But she brushes this off as unimportant, thinking a good wife wouldn't allow things like sex interfere with a relationship (more foreshadowing).
She takes a moment to change into a dress for going out. While putting it on, she briefly struggles to slide it all the way up it as it's a bit more snug on her body than she remembers it, but she thinks "Oh well, not enough that it won't get in the way...it actually feels a little bit more comfortable." It's only a passing thought and she thinks no more of it. (This is foreshadowing for later when Brow notices her curves because the dress is tighter than her usual more modest outfits).
She then heads out. While walking out the door, her thoughts are wrapped up hoping that perhaps something would be different that day. "Even if Dick isn't feeling like doing anything tonight," she thinks, "At least something to different. Something that'll break me out of my routine/comfort zone."....
We cut to her a couple of hours later arriving home. As in the original story, she had fun going out, but had the naggy feeling about the door being locked, her fears seemingly being mollified, and then Brow quietly surprises her sitting in the living room chair with a gun.
Tess asks how he found her house, and Brow reveals his plan. As Tess recoils in horror, Brow smugly adds that for a cop's wife, she's not too bright: didn't even leave the door locked. He orders her to put her hands where he can see them, and then go upstairs. As Tess complies and steps in front of him, starting to walk, she asks him what's he trying to do, he replies he's getting revenge and trying to kill Tracy, etc. Tess does surprise him with her vigor and retaining her composure---far from the shrinking violet he expected. She then starts walking up the stairs. And from there, things unfold like I described at the beginning of the post. He changes his plan and offers her the deal....and after hesitation, she takes it.
Brow smiles, but inside, his heart is beating fast as reality hits him. He had half-expected Tess to say no, that she would never agree to sleep with an ugly man like him. Hearing her say yes briefly makes his mind uncomposed with excitement. "Oh my god...I'm actually going to do it. I'm going to fuck Dick Tracy's wife."
He recomposes himself and has her lead him to the master bedroom. Brow orders her to undress for him (he throws in the first of his manipulative compliments, stating "There's no need to be shy....you have an amazing figure."). She stands with her back to him and does so, slowly and hesitatingly, which just has the unfortunate effect of being teasingly arousing, and that only made it more erotic for him to watch. As her dress slips to the floor, do highlight Brow's view/reaction to Tess's ass: imagine the thoughts of a horny young thug seeing one of the nicest asses in the world, only covered in a thin pair of panties. As she lowers her underwear, he gets a glimpse of her pussy between her legs, furthering his anticipation. He has her turn and face him, and drinks in the view. He snarkily comments that tiny patch of groomed hair between her legs does at least prove she's a natural blonde. He comments how lucky Dick must be to come to that...Tess blushes in a way that Brow picks up on (though he doesn't say anything) as "Hm...could this lady not be getting the attention she needs?"
He then undoes his pants, revealing his nine-inch cock to the sheltered Tess. Just as we got his reactions to Tess's endowments, we get in Tess's reactions to his. This is the PRIME turning point...the air of disinterest/detachment Tess plastered on her face vanishes. She's struck dumb, mesmerized by what she thought impossible.
One thing about Dick Tracy's villains was they were known as "Grotesques" by the fandom. You could tell they were evil...by some external hideous defect they had and a name to go with it. For example..."The Brow" is because he has an oversized brow....Flatttop because he had literal flat-topped head, etc. They were meant to be repulsive....but fascinating in their own way.
I want there to be a shout out of sorts to this in the text. She reflects that Brow's name is a misnomer...because while his Brow is huge and prominent, his cock was grotesquely even more so. "So large almost grotesque..yet fascinating."
Brow tosses aside the rest of his clothes and gets to business. He goes up to her and slowly feels, explores every part of her body. Except instead of the rough handling Tess expected, Brow does something worse...he makes sure very touch arouses. Tess is unable to keep her feelings of arousal in check...her mind already distracted...the thought Brow's cock inside her terrifies her...yet excites her. She tries to rationalize it away...but she can't. Brow adds to the fire by starting the manipulative/psychological games...starting from telling her how beautiful she is, telling her that her ass breasts etc are great and that they can't compare to other women. He eventually edges his way down to her pussy and feigns surprise that she's already wet. Him touching her there, she reflexively jerks backwards, but since he's behind, it only brings her further into his embrace...her heart thumps as she feels his cock, throbbing against her asscheeks. He asks if she's telling him she's ready for him?
Out loud, he states, "well, I guess it's time" and muses what position to take her. He decides to hold off on fucking her on the bed just yet. He orders her to walk on her own to the desk and bend over it. As she bends over the table, Tess reflects all the small ways she wished was different (that she hadn't left door unlocked, that she'd stayed out later), but most of all wishes she was not so aroused at the prospect of being taken, even as she hears him stepping towards her closer and closer. Brow teases her by dragging his cock around, does a little more verbal taunting, and then gets to it. He purposely draws out the process first: first gets the head aligned, then one hand on one hip, then the other, and slowly but steadily pushes it in till he's all the way in. Tess can't help but begin gasping and panting throughout the entire first thrust.
Brow takes one second to enjoy being inside his enemy's wife, but marvels he doesn't need to give her time to adjust...she's fits him comfortably like a warm vise. He fucks her at a steady yet not slow pace first...but eventually can't help but go hard and fast. I want see that he's been without sex for over a year and is now drinking from the oasis. Of course, he continues to taunt her, "You're so tight, Mrs. Tracy...guess your husband either isn't packing much or isn't in there at all." He then does things Dick never did to Tess during sex, like reaching under and playing with her nipples. The hard and fast and animalistic sex, which Tess hasn't experienced, is very arousing, and she doesn't last long before she gives way to small, quiet moans.
Brow Jr taunts Tess as he's fucking her, insinuating that maybe she secretly welcomed the opportunity of getting taken: allowing him to track her and find out her address, leaving the door accidentally unlocked, giving away when Dick would be home, wearing clothes that would show off her ass. "Maybe you noticed me? Maybe you were hoping that I'd come here, and give you the big dick you needed?" Of course,this isn't the truth, but Tess could be at a loss for words, and in her pleasure, can't verbally deny it, adding to her humiliation. Then, Brow quiets down. The room is silent except for the sounds of sex, his hips slapping against her ass, Tess moans and Brow's grunts, the creaking of the table. Eventually Tess comes and has not one, but two orgasms, consecutively. On the second one, Brow gets his...he shoots a year's worth of pent up seed inside her, with expected results. Tess's dimly is aware of this, and her mind panics at thought, but she's too weak/tired to even protest.
Brow then praises Tess for the best sex he'd ever had (another compliment) and then says he will reward her. Brow then carries her in his arms and dumps her on the bed, and eats her out, which she'd never experienced...so that even Brows sloppy/savage approach gets her off. Brow then stands up, and says it's time for her to return the favor. Then Brow has her take him in her mouth. She'd done basic oral with Dick before, but he has her doing other things...deepthroating, and then sucking his balls. Throughout this, he feeds her compliments about how good she is...and to her surprise (and horror), Tess takes pleasure/appreciation in hearing these compliments, feeling pleased that's she's able to accomplish these acts. Even more to her horror, she feels arousal as soon as she sees that he's at full mast...and ready to be inside her again.
Brow then proclaims he sees the lust in her eyes...and lays back on the bed and has her ride him. This time, Tess, while certainly still being coerced, plays the part a little too well...while she first has to take her time to adjust to this position (she silently thinks she's never been on top before), she gets used to it and is soon enthusiastically bouncing up and down. It's a bit different though...less animalistic, and the two move in a way that are almost like...lovers (ex:Tess can;t help but lock her eyes to Brow's). In the last climax, he sits up and kisses her full on the lips, and lost in the moment, Tess kisses back. Her final defeat.
We then get an epilogue. Two weeks later. We see Tess going to a old hotel on the outskirts of town. As she drives we get a recollection of what happened. Here's where I wrote something out, and want you to keep in the story:
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After Brow Junior had left, she’d changed the sheets on the bed and taken another shower to wash herself up. When Dick had returned home that evening, his keen detective skills had gotten him far enough to realize there was something off about her, but he’d been more than happy to attribute it to her being concerned about the latest case he was working on.
Tess didn’t tell him about Brow Junior and what had happened in the bed they shared. Dick was confident that he’d solved another mystery, albeit a small one, and life had gone on as normal. Tess found herself conflicted. She found herself growing increasingly enraged at Dick’s aloofness. Some crack detective you are, she’d thought at him as they ate breakfast together. Can’t even sniff out that your wife’s been ravaged in your very own house. It had taken every ounce of Tess’s willpower not to let out a bitter laugh when Dick mentioned that he’d heard Brow Junior was in town and that he’d have to keep an eye out for the thug. Forget in town, she’d thought. He’s been inside me. She’d managed to let the comment pass, but it hadn’t helped the simmering anger coursing within her.
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Tess recalls how one week later, she gets a package...with pictures of her and Brow. A note states that he;d been carrying a miniature video camera with him for surveillance, and that he'd hidden among his clothes and filmed their encounter. And that while he would keep his word about not going after Dick Tracy anymore...she would need to make a new deal for him to not release the video. And now, once a week, she must go to Brow for a fucking session.
She thinks with guilt how instead of reacting wholly in horror, her first reaction was mixed. Because she had been trying to forget what happened...not because it was horrible experience, but because it had been so pleasurable. The pictures brought back memories of the pleasure he gave her....and even more so, the compliments and attention given, that made her feel validated, appreciated as a woman.
Tess knows now she'll have a new routine in life. As she wished, she's no longer the bored, neglected housewife. Now once a week, the slowest part of her day (when Dick is at work and Joe at school) is spent fucking Brow Jr. And while she wonders how long he'll demand this of her, how long she can keep this up, or how long till Dick finds out. As she steps out of the car, however, such questions slowly filter out of her head....
We similarly find Brow reflecting on himself, and his new direction in life. After Angeltop died, he wasn't quite sure what to do...which is why he thought killing Dick Tracy to avenge her would be it. And then, fucking Tess to get back at him. But then it got to something even more than that..something that went beyond just one day ahead. Whereas his thoughts used to be filled with Angeltop, he now can only think of Tess Tracy. A woman he used to think to be obtainable by someone like him...would now be his and his alone. He thinks about the emotional weakspots he sensed in Tess during that day. He's no fool...he knows Tess is smitten with him in that twisted way...not just because of the sexual fulfillment alone, but because she enjoys the fact that he desires her and expresses it, affirms her sexiness. Physical and emotional fulfillment. He wonders if given enough time and enough sexual meetings occur, Tess will fall for him. Because he's certainly fallen for her....and I think in his own twisted way, he's hoping this blackmailing situation will "court her"He thinks about he'll find honest work for a while, and keep his head down. "Only need to earn just enough to keep this dingy apartment here...definitely don't won't be leaving here as planned."
Brow then gasps in pleasure and looks down, and we see he's sitting on a couch, and from his side, Tess is leaning over and obediently sucking his cock, clearly more comfortable and confident than the first day, about to bring him to the edge. As he comes and notes that she's swallowing everything at it comes out, and smiles "Dick Tracy may have everything else...but I have her. " He happily thinks "A new day and new era" before having Tess wrap her legs around him while he stands up and begins to fuck her...
Budget is very flexible.
Hey, so I have the updated synopsis for my request. Btw, how much closer am I on the list now?
This story would take place in the Dick Tracy comic strip universe. It'd be a noncon/reluc story starring Tess Trueheart-Tracy (the eponymous famous detective's wife) and the Son of the Brow (a minor, C-grade villain, only remarkable for the fact that he's the son of a more famous villain and his main story involved teaming up with his lover, Angeltop, the daughter of another famous villain Flattop, in a "kids avenge the parents scenario). It'd be based off of a short story written I once read in a Dick Tracy anthology.
The original story, in a nutshell, was one focused on Tess, as opposed to Dick, a "day in the limelight" type story. After a family breakfast, after Dick Tracy leaves for work, and their son Joe goes off to school, Tess receives a call from someone hoping to talk to Dick about having him speak at a Crimestoppers Club. Tess offhandedly tells him that Dick will not be home until six, and then goes out to go shopping/catch lunch. While outside, she has a nagging feeling about whether she locked the door or not. When she comes back at around 1, she finds the door locked and signs in relief...until she's confronted by the Son of the Brow, who's there to do the usual "hold her hostage until Dick Tracy comes back so he can kill him" thing, risking it all as he feels he's got nothing else left to live for (getting revenge for his dead GF, Angeltop, who died attempting to kill him in their first story). He was the anonymous caller, had been watching the house, and was able to get in due to her not locking the door after going out. And now knows to expect Tracy at 6, and knows the son Joe will come back from school at 3 as additional leverage. He had found out their house's location when, by chance, he spotted Tess out in the community, recognizing her, and then following her home from a distance.
Here, the story diverges. In the original, Tess and Joe are both captured and subdued, but Dick Tracy comes and saves the day anyways. In the original, Brow comments on how beautiful she is and how Tracy is "one lucky dick", he doesn't try anything with her.
In my vision, when Brow marches her upstairs to tie her up. He's been cool and focused wholly on his task up till now---but then things change as his view point allows him to see an outline of Tess's gorgeous ass through her snugly fitting dress, moving enticingly as she ascends the stairs. So consumed was Brow Jr by the thought of revenge that when making plans, Tess was just one factor to him, one pawn to use. He'd only ever seen off-focus pictures of Tess in newspapers. Now now that he's seen her up close, realizes she's a very beautiful woman, supposedly age 39 but having the looks and body of an 20-something woman in her prime.
It stirs him, and slowly, desire grows within him, as he recalls that he has not had a woman since Angeltop, his one and only relationship (and sexual partner) since his big brow deformity had all the ladies staying away from him. Angeltop, being Flattop's daughter, wasn't exactly a looker either--their relationship was based on love but not on looks, he admits. So he's had some sexual experience, but been without for a while.
All the while during this situation, Tess is doing her usual thing to try: looking for ways to talk her way out of the situation, telling him not to do it, that there's another way. "There's another way" strikes a chord in Brow, only not in the way Tess was hoping for. Seeing Tess in front of him, he sees an opportunity---a bloodless way to get revenge on Tracy much more enticing than his first plan. "Justice," he replies, "your husband took away my lady. I take you, and we're even."
Brow Jr gives this deal to Tess: allow him to fuck her for the next 2 hours, and not only will he walk out of there, but also give up his vendetta with Tracy entirely. If she refuses, he will go with his plan. Tess thinks to herself that she had gotten out of similar situations before, and tries to briefly stall him. Brow, as if reading her mind, adds that even if she got his gun away from him and subdued him, he still knows where they live now, and threatens to sell it to the highest bidder if put in jail. He appeals to her as a wife, mother, and a person---she wouldn't let herself go unharmed if it meant endangering others, would she? Also, if she caves in now, he will leave before Joe's bus comes back, and he will not have to witness anything.
Tess is faced with a situation she never faced in those old-time comics---never has she faced the prospect of being sexually blackmailed and taken by a villain, much less as an ultimatum in exchange for Dick's safety. She has an inner argument when faced with Brow's proposition, but given the immediacy of the situation, and her love for Dick, gives in to his demand.
Main sources of eroticism for this story is the psychological humiliation, and contrast. Here, we have Tess TRUEHEART Tracy, being fucked by another man in her and Dick's own bedroom, and enjoying it immensely. And which villain is it that gets the honor? Not a well-known one, not a crimelord like Big Boy or an prime assassin like Flattop. No, she's taken by Brow Jr, a C-grade villain, a street thug, young and inexperienced, who's failed time and time again when plotting against Tracy. Brow Jr. delights that he's doing something no villain has ever been able to do, and views it as the best revenge revenge possible, surpassing all the other superior criminals in his own way. And like I've already mentioned, he's hideous, while she's the pinnacle of beauty, so the contrast is erotic. Of course, when things get down to it, when he takes her, she can't help but be aroused by his attentions, combining the facts that 1) Dick Tracy being always busy with crimefighting, it has been months since she's had any sexual contact, and 2) His young, virile, animalistic taking of her, while crude, hits all the right spots, long left untouched. Now, she doesn't get into it to the point where it turns fully consensual---but her body and mind is so hazed in pleasure hat that she gets lost in it.
One note: one thing I'd like to see throughout the story is Brow Jr, in his own twisted way, attempting to woo Tess, purely in a lustful matter. He compliments her beauty/body, makes effort to see her pleasured, scorns Dick for not appreciating her body.
Here's some things that'll help get you into the head of Tess and write for her character, and how to semi-plausibly have her fall into lust despite herself. Tess knows that up to a point that she's an attractive woman. But she doesn't seem to be aware that she's drop dead gorgeous by worldly standards. She's sexy without knowing it. She isn't aware that her body is such that it would drop the jaws of men everywhere . This could be due to growing up in a more conservative time to conservative parents...due to Dick Tracy being similarly old fashioned in his views...could be that before and after their marriage, due to his fixation on his work or just aloofness, he never really made her FEEL that way. And of course Dick's friends/coworkers would never express that to her out of respect. Whatever the cause, when Brow starts complimenting her on her body...while part of her is repulsed by the crudeness, another part of her mind perks up, one of validation she never got before but hearing it now, feels...positive. (example: "I....have a great ass?").
And of course...Tess is 39 years old, but about to turn 40 in few months. She's getting up in years. You can probably drop a hint in the beginning of the story about her insecurities about her getting older and losing her attraction. So the notion that this 20 year old young man, from whom she doesn't even expect attraction, expresses her finds her extremely desirable....despite the circumstances surrounding it, this touches something deep inside her.
The beginning of the story should set up/foreshadow Tess's neglect and eventual fall into lust. We start out seeing a house in a nice suburban neighborhood. Spring is here, the sun shining with flowers blooming and birds singing. We get the image of a perfect American home where nothing bad happens. Tess Tracy is alone in her house. She's cleaning up after Dick Tracy and their son Joe after they've left for work and school respectively. We get to look into her thoughts about how she loves her life with her family and wouldn't give it up for the world and do anything protect them (foreshadowing). We see Tess answering the phone (Brow's phone call) and falling for the ruse, a little after Dick leaves for work and Joe for school. After she's finished cleaning up breakfast, she tidies herself up in the bathroom before going out to do lunch with a friend and then grocery shopping after.
At one point, while getting herself ready, she gets a chance to look in the mirror and marvel how well she looks for a 39 year old (just like in the comic books...she still looks like she's in her mid-twenties, no wrinkles, no sag, giving birth did nothing to alter her, etc). But then her thankfulness turns into a sigh, as she recalls how Dick's work doesn't allow for much time spent with her...much less a time to appreciate her still present prime looks....or in the bedroom (more foreshadowing). But she brushes this off as unimportant, thinking a good wife wouldn't allow things like sex interfere with a relationship (more foreshadowing).
She takes a moment to change into a dress for going out. While putting it on, she briefly struggles to slide it all the way up it as it's a bit more snug on her body than she remembers it, but she thinks "Oh well, not enough that it won't get in the way...it actually feels a little bit more comfortable." It's only a passing thought and she thinks no more of it. (This is foreshadowing for later when Brow notices her curves because the dress is tighter than her usual more modest outfits).
She then heads out. While walking out the door, her thoughts are wrapped up hoping that perhaps something would be different that day. "Even if Dick isn't feeling like doing anything tonight," she thinks, "At least something to different. Something that'll break me out of my routine/comfort zone."....
We cut to her a couple of hours later arriving home. As in the original story, she had fun going out, but had the naggy feeling about the door being locked, her fears seemingly being mollified, and then Brow quietly surprises her sitting in the living room chair with a gun.
Tess asks how he found her house, and Brow reveals his plan. As Tess recoils in horror, Brow smugly adds that for a cop's wife, she's not too bright: didn't even leave the door locked. He orders her to put her hands where he can see them, and then go upstairs. As Tess complies and steps in front of him, starting to walk, she asks him what's he trying to do, he replies he's getting revenge and trying to kill Tracy, etc. Tess does surprise him with her vigor and retaining her composure---far from the shrinking violet he expected. She then starts walking up the stairs. And from there, things unfold like I described at the beginning of the post. He changes his plan and offers her the deal....and after hesitation, she takes it.
Brow smiles, but inside, his heart is beating fast as reality hits him. He had half-expected Tess to say no, that she would never agree to sleep with an ugly man like him. Hearing her say yes briefly makes his mind uncomposed with excitement. "Oh my god...I'm actually going to do it. I'm going to fuck Dick Tracy's wife."
He recomposes himself and has her lead him to the master bedroom. Brow orders her to undress for him (he throws in the first of his manipulative compliments, stating "There's no need to be shy....you have an amazing figure."). She stands with her back to him and does so, slowly and hesitatingly, which just has the unfortunate effect of being teasingly arousing, and that only made it more erotic for him to watch. As her dress slips to the floor, do highlight Brow's view/reaction to Tess's ass: imagine the thoughts of a horny young thug seeing one of the nicest asses in the world, only covered in a thin pair of panties. As she lowers her underwear, he gets a glimpse of her pussy between her legs, furthering his anticipation. He has her turn and face him, and drinks in the view. He snarkily comments that tiny patch of groomed hair between her legs does at least prove she's a natural blonde. He comments how lucky Dick must be to come to that...Tess blushes in a way that Brow picks up on (though he doesn't say anything) as "Hm...could this lady not be getting the attention she needs?"
He then undoes his pants, revealing his nine-inch cock to the sheltered Tess. Just as we got his reactions to Tess's endowments, we get in Tess's reactions to his. This is the PRIME turning point...the air of disinterest/detachment Tess plastered on her face vanishes. She's struck dumb, mesmerized by what she thought impossible.
One thing about Dick Tracy's villains was they were known as "Grotesques" by the fandom. You could tell they were evil...by some external hideous defect they had and a name to go with it. For example..."The Brow" is because he has an oversized brow....Flatttop because he had literal flat-topped head, etc. They were meant to be repulsive....but fascinating in their own way.
I want there to be a shout out of sorts to this in the text. She reflects that Brow's name is a misnomer...because while his Brow is huge and prominent, his cock was grotesquely even more so. "So large almost grotesque..yet fascinating."
Brow tosses aside the rest of his clothes and gets to business. He goes up to her and slowly feels, explores every part of her body. Except instead of the rough handling Tess expected, Brow does something worse...he makes sure very touch arouses. Tess is unable to keep her feelings of arousal in check...her mind already distracted...the thought Brow's cock inside her terrifies her...yet excites her. She tries to rationalize it away...but she can't. Brow adds to the fire by starting the manipulative/psychological games...starting from telling her how beautiful she is, telling her that her ass breasts etc are great and that they can't compare to other women. He eventually edges his way down to her pussy and feigns surprise that she's already wet. Him touching her there, she reflexively jerks backwards, but since he's behind, it only brings her further into his embrace...her heart thumps as she feels his cock, throbbing against her asscheeks. He asks if she's telling him she's ready for him?
Out loud, he states, "well, I guess it's time" and muses what position to take her. He decides to hold off on fucking her on the bed just yet. He orders her to walk on her own to the desk and bend over it. As she bends over the table, Tess reflects all the small ways she wished was different (that she hadn't left door unlocked, that she'd stayed out later), but most of all wishes she was not so aroused at the prospect of being taken, even as she hears him stepping towards her closer and closer. Brow teases her by dragging his cock around, does a little more verbal taunting, and then gets to it. He purposely draws out the process first: first gets the head aligned, then one hand on one hip, then the other, and slowly but steadily pushes it in till he's all the way in. Tess can't help but begin gasping and panting throughout the entire first thrust.
Brow takes one second to enjoy being inside his enemy's wife, but marvels he doesn't need to give her time to adjust...she's fits him comfortably like a warm vise. He fucks her at a steady yet not slow pace first...but eventually can't help but go hard and fast. I want see that he's been without sex for over a year and is now drinking from the oasis. Of course, he continues to taunt her, "You're so tight, Mrs. Tracy...guess your husband either isn't packing much or isn't in there at all." He then does things Dick never did to Tess during sex, like reaching under and playing with her nipples. The hard and fast and animalistic sex, which Tess hasn't experienced, is very arousing, and she doesn't last long before she gives way to small, quiet moans.
Brow Jr taunts Tess as he's fucking her, insinuating that maybe she secretly welcomed the opportunity of getting taken: allowing him to track her and find out her address, leaving the door accidentally unlocked, giving away when Dick would be home, wearing clothes that would show off her ass. "Maybe you noticed me? Maybe you were hoping that I'd come here, and give you the big dick you needed?" Of course,this isn't the truth, but Tess could be at a loss for words, and in her pleasure, can't verbally deny it, adding to her humiliation. Then, Brow quiets down. The room is silent except for the sounds of sex, his hips slapping against her ass, Tess moans and Brow's grunts, the creaking of the table. Eventually Tess comes and has not one, but two orgasms, consecutively. On the second one, Brow gets his...he shoots a year's worth of pent up seed inside her, with expected results. Tess's dimly is aware of this, and her mind panics at thought, but she's too weak/tired to even protest.
Brow then praises Tess for the best sex he'd ever had (another compliment) and then says he will reward her. Brow then carries her in his arms and dumps her on the bed, and eats her out, which she'd never experienced...so that even Brows sloppy/savage approach gets her off. Brow then stands up, and says it's time for her to return the favor. Then Brow has her take him in her mouth. She'd done basic oral with Dick before, but he has her doing other things...deepthroating, and then sucking his balls. Throughout this, he feeds her compliments about how good she is...and to her surprise (and horror), Tess takes pleasure/appreciation in hearing these compliments, feeling pleased that's she's able to accomplish these acts. Even more to her horror, she feels arousal as soon as she sees that he's at full mast...and ready to be inside her again.
Brow then proclaims he sees the lust in her eyes...and lays back on the bed and has her ride him. This time, Tess, while certainly still being coerced, plays the part a little too well...while she first has to take her time to adjust to this position (she silently thinks she's never been on top before), she gets used to it and is soon enthusiastically bouncing up and down. It's a bit different though...less animalistic, and the two move in a way that are almost like...lovers (ex:Tess can;t help but lock her eyes to Brow's). In the last climax, he sits up and kisses her full on the lips, and lost in the moment, Tess kisses back. Her final defeat.
We then get an epilogue. Two weeks later. We see Tess going to a old hotel on the outskirts of town. As she drives we get a recollection of what happened. Here's where I wrote something out, and want you to keep in the story:
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After Brow Junior had left, she’d changed the sheets on the bed and taken another shower to wash herself up. When Dick had returned home that evening, his keen detective skills had gotten him far enough to realize there was something off about her, but he’d been more than happy to attribute it to her being concerned about the latest case he was working on.
Tess didn’t tell him about Brow Junior and what had happened in the bed they shared. Dick was confident that he’d solved another mystery, albeit a small one, and life had gone on as normal. Tess found herself conflicted. She found herself growing increasingly enraged at Dick’s aloofness. Some crack detective you are, she’d thought at him as they ate breakfast together. Can’t even sniff out that your wife’s been ravaged in your very own house. It had taken every ounce of Tess’s willpower not to let out a bitter laugh when Dick mentioned that he’d heard Brow Junior was in town and that he’d have to keep an eye out for the thug. Forget in town, she’d thought. He’s been inside me. She’d managed to let the comment pass, but it hadn’t helped the simmering anger coursing within her.
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Tess recalls how one week later, she gets a package...with pictures of her and Brow. A note states that he;d been carrying a miniature video camera with him for surveillance, and that he'd hidden among his clothes and filmed their encounter. And that while he would keep his word about not going after Dick Tracy anymore...she would need to make a new deal for him to not release the video. And now, once a week, she must go to Brow for a fucking session.
She thinks with guilt how instead of reacting wholly in horror, her first reaction was mixed. Because she had been trying to forget what happened...not because it was horrible experience, but because it had been so pleasurable. The pictures brought back memories of the pleasure he gave her....and even more so, the compliments and attention given, that made her feel validated, appreciated as a woman.
Tess knows now she'll have a new routine in life. As she wished, she's no longer the bored, neglected housewife. Now once a week, the slowest part of her day (when Dick is at work and Joe at school) is spent fucking Brow Jr. And while she wonders how long he'll demand this of her, how long she can keep this up, or how long till Dick finds out. As she steps out of the car, however, such questions slowly filter out of her head....
We similarly find Brow reflecting on himself, and his new direction in life. After Angeltop died, he wasn't quite sure what to do...which is why he thought killing Dick Tracy to avenge her would be it. And then, fucking Tess to get back at him. But then it got to something even more than that..something that went beyond just one day ahead. Whereas his thoughts used to be filled with Angeltop, he now can only think of Tess Tracy. A woman he used to think to be obtainable by someone like him...would now be his and his alone. He thinks about the emotional weakspots he sensed in Tess during that day. He's no fool...he knows Tess is smitten with him in that twisted way...not just because of the sexual fulfillment alone, but because she enjoys the fact that he desires her and expresses it, affirms her sexiness. Physical and emotional fulfillment. He wonders if given enough time and enough sexual meetings occur, Tess will fall for him. Because he's certainly fallen for her....and I think in his own twisted way, he's hoping this blackmailing situation will "court her"He thinks about he'll find honest work for a while, and keep his head down. "Only need to earn just enough to keep this dingy apartment here...definitely don't won't be leaving here as planned."
Brow then gasps in pleasure and looks down, and we see he's sitting on a couch, and from his side, Tess is leaning over and obediently sucking his cock, clearly more comfortable and confident than the first day, about to bring him to the edge. As he comes and notes that she's swallowing everything at it comes out, and smiles "Dick Tracy may have everything else...but I have her. " He happily thinks "A new day and new era" before having Tess wrap her legs around him while he stands up and begins to fuck her...
