Hello all,
With the new year I decided to finally right something of my own and post it. So I posted my story Additional Tutoring (Non-con/Reluctance) followed by a second part (erotic couplings) earlier today.
I also started a second series called Forbidden Fruit (Erotic Couplings) with the second part currently pending to be posted.
I would greatly appreciate some feedback on these three stories. They seem to be doing moderately well (I think? I don't really know what good numbers are in the time theyve been up). I know there's a typo or two, and the edit on those is currently pending.
How is my writing style? Anything you dislike? Any turnoffs?
Thanks for any and all feedback
~Sudete
With the new year I decided to finally right something of my own and post it. So I posted my story Additional Tutoring (Non-con/Reluctance) followed by a second part (erotic couplings) earlier today.
I also started a second series called Forbidden Fruit (Erotic Couplings) with the second part currently pending to be posted.
I would greatly appreciate some feedback on these three stories. They seem to be doing moderately well (I think? I don't really know what good numbers are in the time theyve been up). I know there's a typo or two, and the edit on those is currently pending.
How is my writing style? Anything you dislike? Any turnoffs?
Thanks for any and all feedback
~Sudete
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