Looking for a volunteer editor- Humiliation, Non fiction, Female sub

[Anahitah]

I have been planning to share my very first story on this platform since quite a few months now.
The story is about my own experience and I have tried to put into words as best as I could, but I still feel that it is lacking the details or maybe the writing style is not good enough.
Tags of the story- humiliation, virtual, degradation, non fiction, female sub, male dom.
Tone of the story- Engaging and borderline Luxury style (I tried)
Story is about 1600-1700 words
Open to make as many changes required.
Since this is my first story, having an experienced editor would be ideal.
Hoping to get a reply from soon.
Thanks and regards
Anahita

 

[SFV55]

I'm interested to give you some feedback or line-editing suggestions.

 

[AlinaX]

Happy to take a look if you need.

 

[Anahitah]

Happy to take a look if you need.

Yes please I’ll pm you

 

[Anahitah]

I'm interested to give you some feedback or line-editing suggestions.

I’ll pm you

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

I also volunteer.

 

[oralninja]

I have been planning to share my very first story on this platform since quite a few months now.
The story is about my own experience and I have tried to put into words as best as I could, but I still feel that it is lacking the details or maybe the writing style is not good enough.
Tags of the story- humiliation, virtual, degradation, non fiction, female sub, male dom.
Tone of the story- Engaging and borderline Luxury style (I tried)
Story is about 1600-1700 words
Open to make as many changes required.
Since this is my first story, having an experienced editor would be ideal.
Hoping to get a reply from soon.
Thanks and regards
Anahita

Happy to help edit your story. Pls pm me if you still need help editing

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

No answer from @Anahitah