UnderYourSpell
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Even with my speakers turned right up I can hardly hear this, perhaps it's the lack of expression in your voice.
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Hot ................Shots, cocktails and a reverie gone mad by todski28
https://soundcloud.com/todski28/shots-cocktails-and-a-reverie
Shots, cocktails and a reverie gone mad
There is pressure building
a guitar riff
a drum solo
a voice cutting through the dark
caramel Manhattans dripping from my lips
the luscious salted-sweet and alcohol fire
that mires me in memories
trapping desires in the bulge of my zipper
first hellos wrapped like cyanide in the humidity
clouds full to burst with luscious rain
fingertips walking gently down
their nervous quiver intoxicating the drunken
stupor of my shirt
I know it’s just a reverie
a memory
but I can still feel you there
a spark of light twisting, arching, aching
I switch from the sweet burn
to pure flame
as I pour out the hard stuff
lap up salt
slam you down in the elements
the first drops of aqua drip from the heavens
steam rising from the earth
grass-scented liquid passion
I’m drunk on vices (desires) flowing river
coursing rapids
where I shot the chauffeur so I could have you
here in the rain
while I’m still tipsy enough to not give a fuck
about propriety, mucking in the mud
there is a vibe, vibrating like the tingle of static
the build-up….. the pour of more before the gush of release
crashes of lightning that rip the air into ozone
and thunder
liquefied passion running down my chin
the flash of light slashes my mind
all I want is
a refill
Loved it, just as I thought i would!
Loved it, just as I thought i would!
I did too. I never met a southern belle-ish barfly before, but if I did, I bet she'd talk just like this.
perfect example of contemporary poetry
Bravo to both of you for reviving this thread.
Perfect I’ve always enjoyed your writing and your readings champ, thanks for sharing, I wa driving and managed to get through a couple of listens and your sound structures are well placed and timing is executed to add to the impact of the words themselves
Really very poignant Calli. Thank you for a taste of your roots.
Let's hear you Piscator!! lol
damned adulting anyway!
Good poem and thank you!