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Mordikai
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Hi
I have been fortunate enough to have had three submissions accepted in the non-consensual story category. I started submitting them in order to improve my story telling but have been disappointed in how little feedback I have received. 12 thousand views 60 star ratings and 2 comments is a paltry return.
So I am requesting feedback to help improve my writing. I am happy to read your stories in return and feedback If you wish... I am old but am inexperienced in story writing.
I was so tempted to put I don't know much about writing but I know what I like.
Here are the links
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-stranger-58
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-devil-and-danni
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-devil-and-danni-ch-02
I have been fortunate enough to have had three submissions accepted in the non-consensual story category. I started submitting them in order to improve my story telling but have been disappointed in how little feedback I have received. 12 thousand views 60 star ratings and 2 comments is a paltry return.
So I am requesting feedback to help improve my writing. I am happy to read your stories in return and feedback If you wish... I am old but am inexperienced in story writing.
I was so tempted to put I don't know much about writing but I know what I like.
Here are the links
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-stranger-58
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-devil-and-danni
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-devil-and-danni-ch-02
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