Hello. I am new to this site and have been working on my story. It is not done yet, but has close to 11, 000 words. I have sent it to three people expecting to be critiqued. What I got instead were men saying, "yea, it's good. Now lets meet up for sex..." I am not looking to meet anyone for sex or be your submissive. All I want is for someone to honestly tell me how good or bad my story is, and some tips would help. I am from Brazil and just moved to Texas for college. I need work on my English and writing and thought this would be a fun place to do that.
If you would, please help. Just keep in mind that I am not going to sleep with you. Thank you.
If you would, please help. Just keep in mind that I am not going to sleep with you. Thank you.