General Feedback for Mother and Son Sexual Romance

[HealingArtist]

Mother and Son, a mature adult romance with no guilt or taboos.
Opening up a new and a developed sense of territory, with a long and intelligently consistent story about mother and son, who grew close together with openness and honesty. Especially about their feelings for one another, that formed out of genuine love, respect and a health conscious sexual acknowledgement when both become mature and fully adult.

Recognizing the unique bond and sense of intimacy that comes from trust and admiration, as well as attraction sexually. Sex in this concept here at Literotica seems to addictively follow a pattern formula centering around guilt, shame and too much lust. The result is most always the same.
Raunchy graphic sex descriptions with the typical nagging sense of forbidinness and guilt. Most always born out of a sense of, a lack of trust. For the main character or the partner. both. There is a place for those scenarios. They also can be enticing. Only occasionally I've read some nice stories with a "little romance" thrown in there. But mostly an overwhelming appearance of "dirty thoughts and desires". A sexual relationship between a healthy mother and son need not be so typecast and preordained as "unholy or abominable".

There are those of us who read these stories looking for a broader open minded sense of true intimacy, and a fulfilling personal reality between two adults regardless of their blood relation. Life is too short to be in constant denial of true thoughts and feelings, or to condemn them due to "conventional thinking". People have to contend with the way of the world with logic and reason in a very sharp, openly thoughtful manner, just to survive against competition and judgement.

The ability for an intelligent, mature and sympathetic mother/son connection is more than just a porno scene, as mostly described on here. And not with the proverbial feeling of "corruption whispering in their ears". I would like to see more of this concept explored and written out in great detail and length. I have thought of doing so myself but never have, due to not having written fictional stories before.
I am just planting seeds of ideas and possibilities. I am not trying to take away from what is already here. Yes the sex can be descriptive in detail. But not always pornographic just to be stimulating. Oral sex is good. Straight sexual intercourse is the most powerful for very intimate partners. Romance and falling in love with great attention to the details of emotions and longings between those partners, who have played conventional for so long. Only now the relationship has evolved into a pragmatic and realistic sexual maturity for both.

There is really nothing wrong for two adults who love and trust each other to become romantic and sexual. Without guilt or shame, even if they are mother and son. Young men are not wrong for admiring and desiring their beloved mothers, and the mothers for their maturing sons. Making it dirty constantly in a narrative, does not perpetually make for great reading. Many of the stories here end up concluding too abruptly after the sex scene, and come across as juvenille.
I have never had an incestual relationship of any kind in my life. But I have had thoughts and desire towards beautiful female relatives. At 60 yrs of age, a U.S veteran, a bereaved parent and a widower, I have seen the double standard of society infiltrate and retard a lot of individuals growth and realizations in regard to their own sexual development and fulfillment. Because of the guilt (mentally) associated with it.

To read more about this, I am hoping some of the true and sophisticated talent on this site will start creating more of what I am trying to describe in this thread. A fully satisfying romance between mother and son with the annoying sinful taboos, would feel a lot different from the cookie cutter scenarios that constantly fill these pages. There are a lot of good writers here. It is not practical to go through each one individually and try to tell them all this same message.

So here it is, hopefully for all to read. And, to see the couples end up for life, love, intimacy and happiness together. Maybe I will have to do it myself? I would need to start studying concepts and story developing skills, for a realistic narrative and dialogues between the potential characters. Please consider this my first open contribution to this website. Anyway, I hope this reaches a lot of you authors and readers out there and to receive positive feedback you as well.
Best
John

 

[ElectricBlue]

What you see on Lit is what you get, with regard to Incest and Taboo. I can't see the overall model changing any time soon.

If you want to lead the charge for a change, you're probably going to have to do it yourself. Typical mother/son material is formulaic, not particularly imaginative, and relies on an "old faithful" set of tropes. There's plenty of material around on "how to write a great incest story", and there's without doubt some good content out there. The problem is the dross - there's so much content, the law of averages says a lot if it's going to be very ordinary.

 

[AwkwardMD]

Incest without guilt, shame, and taboo is romance with an age difference. Try the mature category and look for something in the April-December range.

 

[lovecraft68]

I can't get more than a few lines through that block of text, can you put some spacing in between the paragraphs?

 

[lovecraft68]

Incest without guilt, shame, and taboo is romance with an age difference. Try the mature category and look for something in the April-December range.

Same for father daughter for the most part.

 

[HealingArtist]

Paragraphs

Sorry. Not accustomed to writing and posting threads online. Thanks for politely point it out. Did what you suggested.

 

[HealingArtist]

Incest without guilt, shame, and taboo is romance with an age difference. Try the mature category and look for something in the April-December range.

May I ask where to find this "April to December range" as you suggested ? Thanks.

 

[8letters]

Maybe I will have to do it myself?

I'd say yes. I'm plenty busy writing my own visions of what would make a great story and don't have time to write someone else's.

Sex in this concept here at Literotica seems to addictively follow a pattern formula centering around guilt, shame and too much lust.

As a mother-son relationship can't be an open one in our society, guilt and shame are built into the relationship. If you want to read about an older woman-younger man romance without guilt or shame, look someplace besides Incest/Taboo. Sounds like you're want to eat your cake and have it too.

 

[ElectricBlue]

As a mother-son relationship can't be an open one in our society, guilt and shame are built into the relationship. If you want to read about an older woman-younger man romance without guilt or shame, look someplace besides Incest/Taboo. Sounds like you're want to eat your cake and have it too.

8letters has a point. If you want love and tenderness without the intra-family guilt, you can take the incest element away, and wander over to the Mature category where you will find:

Older man/younger woman (many women have a daddy thing that's not the Daddy/daughter kink - which is a whole specialised sub-genre of Incest),

Older woman/younger man (ranging from cougar cliche to what I think you might be looking for),

Older couples

- with any age gap or age bracket you might choose.

It's a smaller category than I&T, and the readership wants to see emotion and personalities in their stories. There's a lot of good of good writing there, and I suspect less kink and fetish (aside from the extreme age difference stories).

Look around, you'll find what you're looking for, I'm sure, but maybe not in Incest (which is more a set of single track mainlines that each carry a huge amount of traffic).

 

[lovecraft68]

I'd say yes. I'm plenty busy writing my own visions of what would make a great story and don't have time to write someone else's.


As a mother-son relationship can't be an open one in our society, guilt and shame are built into the relationship. If you want to read about an older woman-younger man romance without guilt or shame, look someplace besides Incest/Taboo. Sounds like you're want to eat your cake and have it too.

You can have that if the story were to feature a mother son couple who move and are living in another state and people don't know them and think they're a couple and she's a cougar shacking up with a cub.

Those stories have their own level of hot. A mother grinding all over her son on a dance floor and people watching and having no idea who they are to each other. The mother telling a neighbor how hot her sex life is with a young man and telling her stories and the woman has know idea this is her son she's talking about.

 

[AwkwardMD]

Those stories have their own level of hot. A mother grinding all over her son on a dance floor and people watching and having no idea who they are to each other. The mother telling a neighbor how hot her sex life is with a young man and telling her stories and the woman has know idea this is her son she's talking about.

The story you're describing hinges on the secrecy of the taboo rather than the lack of it, and I don't think it avoids the subject like the OP is asking for.

Of course, I could be wrong.

EDIT: It sounds hot as hell though. A scorcher of a short story.

 

[LegendInMyOwnMind]

I really like OP's idea and I would love to see him write that story. My writing skills aren't up to it yet, but if someday they are, this is a story I'd like to write myself. I haven't delved into the incest genre yet.

My next story will lift the hem of the garment just a bit. Part of the female lead's backstory involves a one time mother-daughter encounter that is very loving, instigated by the daughter (the female lead). The male lead is very accepting of her story, and finds himself exited more by the love than more than the sex.

 

[AwkwardMD]

My next story will lift the hem of the garment just a bit. Part of the female lead's backstory involves a one time mother-daughter encounter that is very loving, instigated by the daughter (the female lead). The male lead is very accepting of her story, and finds himself exited more by the love than more than the sex.

Your story, given this description, is you telling the reader about one character telling another character about that character and her mother.

I don't know what your experience level is like, but this sounds like a lot of telling and not a lot of showing unless you're going to make extensive use of flashbacks (which is its own writing sin). This would be difficult to pull off effectively for anyone.

 

[LegendInMyOwnMind]

Your story, given this description, is you telling the reader about one character telling another character about that character and her mother.

I don't know what your experience level is like, but this sounds like a lot of telling and not a lot of showing unless you're going to make extensive use of flashbacks (which is its own writing sin). This would be difficult to pull off effectively for anyone.

Thank, AwkwardMD. I decided to cut the scene and save it for another story. With some changes it could form the nucleus of a story of its own. I'm doing a rewrite that cuts a lot of backstory in general, and I like the results. I'm not an experienced writer, and the first thing anyone needs in order to become one is realizing they aren't. Good advice can shorten the learning process, and I appreciate yours.

 

[AwkwardMD]

Every author ever has been guilty of assembling some very rickety-looking plot structures that sound great at first.

Strong storytelling lives at the heart of your story. If the heart of your story is the romantic, supportive, sexually charged relationship between a husband and wife then show that. Make something happen within the timeframe of your story that helps your protagonist fall in love all over again.