First time author looking for help with story structure and development. Fantasy and fictional religious themes.

[ColourfulChemist]

I have written and shared two sets of two coupled stories (12,502 words all combined). I'm mainly looking for someone to help me with story structure and to improve my writing since this was the first time I ever wrote anything at all. If someone also wanted to bounce ideas around I'd also like that.

My stories take place in a fictional universe and alternate between the story of the gods creating the universe and the followers rituals interpreting the creation stories. There are some light BDSM elements (impact and fire play).

Thank you in advance,
Franco

 

[AchtungNight]

I am interested in helping you depending on timetable. Start a private conversation with me please if you wish to discuss it further.