firmbutgentle
Verbiage and bondage
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- Mar 2, 2007
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- 104
A very few meaningful exchanges, but they were very valuable and greatly appreciate.
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I didn't say in third person. I understand (as it sounds like you do) why the score was so low and why the comments so vitriolic. There's a way to do a story from the wife's point of view that makes her at least as sympathetic as the husband, if not more; but giving her "the win," as a lot of LW readers will see it, and especially undoing everything the husband did to secure a happier future for himself is not the way to do that. For that matter, we've seen that female-led BTBs can work; Range Cold did very well. But a BTB by a (repeatedly) cheating wife? Nah. That isn't going to fly. All you did was make the readers hate her even more.Notalenthack suggested my story would have been better written in third person showing what happened later from both points of view. But that would not have worked. This was one where the female protagonist had her viewpoint that was far removed from what the husband suggested in the original. Readers identified with him so his version was the 'truth'.
gone!If I knew how to provoke more feedback, positive or negative, I'd be very happy.
Sorry. I've no iidea how to interpret "gone."gone!
Sorry mysrlf.Sorry. I've no iidea how to interpret "gone."
Huh. So that's a thing? Care to share again so I can chuckle?Sorry mysrlf.
I deleted a humorous (hopefully!) post meant for a limited time.
“gone” or “poof” means it was removed
by the writer.
If I knew how to provoke more feedback, positive or negative, I'd be very happy
It was about dropping shameless promotions of one’s stories in threads like some people do.Huh. So that's a thing? Care to share again so I can chuckle?
Then could you engage this reader and tell me how to find Book 1 of your Hardesty series here on Lit? You said books 1-6 were here but I can't find it. I posted a good review on Amazon and would like to post it here too. Searching for the title or for "Hardesty" in your list of stories didn't do it.I engage with readers as long as that's useful. A reader here engaged with me on another site seventeen years ago; invited me to post here as well; became a cowriter, my editor, and one of my publishers; and we have continued to engage every day since then.
Thanks for asking. They start under the sr71plt account and continue on in keithd:Then could you engage this reader and tell me how to find Book 1 of your Hardesty series here on Lit? You said books 1-6 were here but I can't find it. I posted a good review on Amazon and would like to post it here too. Searching for the title or for "Hardesty" in your list of stories didn't do it.
Yes! And also what they think of my characters, who they like and why, whether they feel real/relatable. I too would love to get more feedback from people who really read the stories. But as a reader I also know it’s a big investment to engage like that with SO many other things to read. A reader who pays attention and cares enough to comment meaningfully is giving you a valuable gift.I'm curious about how my stories come across, about how many people there are out there who share my tastes
I had one anon feedback rant and rave about how much he hated my story... except that his description of the plot made it clear that it wasn't my story at all.I like the feedback that we all get from time to time where they ask you a direct question, but sent it anon and you can't reply.
Those are great. I had one where they ranted about a taboo story and for a bit I thought it was mine until he named the character and I'm like who the hell is that? Then they started about the "daddy son shit" and I'm like, nah, wrong pew pal.I had one anon feedback rant and rave about how much he hated my story... except that his description of the plot made it clear that it wasn't my story at all.
Thank you! For the links and for solving the mystery.Thanks for asking. They start under the sr71plt account and continue on in keithd:
Gotta Keep Trying (1): https://www.literotica.com/s/gotta-keep-trying-ch-01
Snitches (2): https://www.literotica.com/s/snitches-ch-01-day-01
Retribution (3): https://www.literotica.com/s/retribution-20
Political Abuse (4): https://www.literotica.com/s/political-abuse
Fan Male (5): https://www.literotica.com/s/fan-male-ch-01
Capital Treasures (6): https://www.literotica.com/s/capital-treasures
What about in person for inspiration
Besides that, you'd have to make awkward conversation with someone.Are you... asking if I engage with readers in person? Absolutely fucking not. Sounds like a sure way to end up a prisoner in someone's crudely made basement dungeon.
Besides that, you'd have to make awkward conversation with someone.