Randy_Scribbler
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I was wondering if anyone would be so kind as to check out my humour/smut story. It won't be to everyone's liking since the humour is very childish and British. They do say us Brits have a unique sense of humour. Think of it as a cross between a Carry On movie and a sketch from the Viz magazine.
Even if it isn't your sort of thing, please read part of it and let me know how the writing is -- does it flow, make sense? Is the grammar good?
I uploaded this to another site and it got a fair bit of feedback.
Here it is: https://www.literotica.com/s/dirty-derek-and-the-nymph-next-door
I'll try to upload a pic to go with it as well.
Cheers guys!
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Even if it isn't your sort of thing, please read part of it and let me know how the writing is -- does it flow, make sense? Is the grammar good?
I uploaded this to another site and it got a fair bit of feedback.
Here it is: https://www.literotica.com/s/dirty-derek-and-the-nymph-next-door
I'll try to upload a pic to go with it as well.
Cheers guys!
[Uploading copyright images on Literotica is against forum rules]
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