Attack of the Sand Squid

My new story Attack of the Sand Squid just dropped https://www.literotica.com/s/attack-of-the-sand-squid Feedback greatly appreciated and my deepest thanks to Todger 65 for the edit. Also, check out the picture by Synthean on Hentai Foundry. You'll see why I found it so inspiring

Nice response, and a spammer.

The story seems to be doing reasonably well so far; not as well as I hoped but better than I expected. It's a nice story I think personally but not one of my best. The response has been pretty good; thanks to those who voted. I seem to have caught the attention of a spammer, annoyingly. I don't know if anyone else has been getting it. So far I flagged two messages.

Well, I never read anything like that before. It kept my interest, I will say that.

Over all, well written, although their were some word choices that seemed a bit off to me. For example: "Her aunt was only 43, just under a decade older than herself." Under/older doesn't work. "Her aunt was only 43, just less than a decade older than herself." That works. But that's small stuff.

What does put me off somewhat is the use of "porn language"; referring to the women as milfs, specifying breast sizes, that sort of thing. I find it annoying, and I think most female readers do.

But, I will say, you made me aware of a whole genre I knew nothing about!

Not my thing to read, but I love your schlock B movie/Creature double feature titles.

Spammer

There's a pesky spammer on my story comments section like a chronic virus. It looks like he's on a few others too. Thanks for the response so far.

PrevertOne said:

The story seems to be doing reasonably well so far; not as well as I hoped but better than I expected. It's a nice story I think personally but not one of my best. The response has been pretty good; thanks to those who voted. I seem to have caught the attention of a spammer, annoyingly. I don't know if anyone else has been getting it. So far I flagged two messages.

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