Editor for Mature/Cheating Story

PerilEyes

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Hey y'all. Writing a tale involving a mom who's turned out by a younger jerk type. What do I mean by 'turned out'? He seduces and corrupts a housewife into thinking that she deserves better than the boring lifestyle and uncaring husband he convinces her she has. Essentially he remakes her.

I've got the first chapter done and that clocks in at about 3700 words. Looking for someone to look over my grammar and make sure what I've done is actually readable. I don't need to much help with plot details and storytelling itself, but I'd certainly always welcome suggestions.

Contact me through here or PM and we can work through email. Thanks!
 
characters

I don't think I have the patience to edit for you.

Does it feature any interesting characters worthy of a Cast?
 
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