NightPorter
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Name: Falling Snow
Author: Nightporter
Category: Erotic Horror
Description: A succubus knows how to keep a lost skier warm
My first story was approved today. I'm looking for constructive criticism beyond the rating system. So that I might improve as an writer. So please give it a read and let me know what I'm doing right/wrong. Thanks!
https://www.literotica.com/s/falling-snow
Author: Nightporter
Category: Erotic Horror
Description: A succubus knows how to keep a lost skier warm
My first story was approved today. I'm looking for constructive criticism beyond the rating system. So that I might improve as an writer. So please give it a read and let me know what I'm doing right/wrong. Thanks!
https://www.literotica.com/s/falling-snow