cbsinclair
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Feedback Request: Angel in Heat
Hi everybody!
I just had my first story submitted here at Literotica and came home today to find 62 votes already and a 4 star average! Yay! Sadly, no comments. If you are willing, please leave me some constructive criticism here in this thread. I'm a new author and I could really use the feedback. Please be honest, but gentle with me.
Angel in Heat by C. B. Sinclair
https://www.literotica.com/s/angel-in-heat
It's in the Group Sex category. This very short piece is about a young actress who contemplates becoming a porn star. She's not sure if she'd be willing to have sex with strangers in front of an audience. That is until she encounters three men in a sauna. It changes her outlook.
FYI, this is the first in a series. I actually published the second book from the series because it was a Christmas fantasy and it was my gift to myself, to push me into a writing career. It's free on Smashwords, so if you enjoy this one, you might like Angel Under the Tree.
Hi everybody!
I just had my first story submitted here at Literotica and came home today to find 62 votes already and a 4 star average! Yay! Sadly, no comments. If you are willing, please leave me some constructive criticism here in this thread. I'm a new author and I could really use the feedback. Please be honest, but gentle with me.
Angel in Heat by C. B. Sinclair
https://www.literotica.com/s/angel-in-heat
It's in the Group Sex category. This very short piece is about a young actress who contemplates becoming a porn star. She's not sure if she'd be willing to have sex with strangers in front of an audience. That is until she encounters three men in a sauna. It changes her outlook.
FYI, this is the first in a series. I actually published the second book from the series because it was a Christmas fantasy and it was my gift to myself, to push me into a writing career. It's free on Smashwords, so if you enjoy this one, you might like Angel Under the Tree.
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