Dress description : please help

I'm thinking of writing a story which involves many characters and need help with the description of the dresses/outfits for the ladies. I want the ladies in the story to change outfits several times for different occasions and I'm not so good at describing ladies outfits even though I have the picture in my head. So please share your description for the sluttiest, Skimpiest, no panties, high heels, pussy and butt hole revealing, transparent, shocking outfits etc... you can come up with so that I can use it in my story. please contribute as many outfit ideas as you can... The best descriptions will definitely be featured in my story. Thanks a zilllion!

Clarifying question: does the onesie with a flap qualify as "butt hole revealing" for you?

Miles Long said:

Clarifying question: does the onesie with a flap qualify as "butt hole revealing" for you?

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Without the panties, yes! Then again im thinking more on the lines of micro-mini skirts that can barely cover half of the ass cheeks thereby without panties, the backdoor is in plain view...

Easternwindz said:

I'm thinking of writing a story which involves many characters and need help with the description of the dresses/outfits for the ladies. I want the ladies in the story to change outfits several times for different occasions and I'm not so good at describing ladies outfits even though I have the picture in my head. So please share your description for the sluttiest, Skimpiest, no panties, high heels, pussy and butt hole revealing, transparent, shocking outfits etc... you can come up with so that I can use it in my story. please contribute as many outfit ideas as you can... The best descriptions will definitely be featured in my story. Thanks a zilllion!

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not to rain on the parade of tarts about to start here but you should check out some catalogs of the sort of things you're going to be dressing your people in.
They're pretty good about putting in descriptions of the items they sell and that will probably help you get (what you're writing) going.

(yeah, added the "what you're writing" since I could see that sentence going badly wrong.)

Also, if you want descriptions you should post pics or links to pics so that folks have an idea where you want to go otherwise you're going to be all over the road here.
Slutty is more subjective than you probably realize.

Easternwindz said:

Without the panties, yes! Then again im thinking more on the lines of micro-mini skirts that can barely cover half of the ass cheeks thereby without panties, the backdoor is in plain view...

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Ok, but I don't know if I can find a picture of that with duckies all over it.

Hrm...

First, what are the outfits that you have in mind? I hate duplicating efforts.

Second, I've found it is rare that a woman wears clothing that is "pussy and butt hole revealing" even if they are wearing a belt and nothing else.
Since they have internal genetalia, you rarely see anything clearly "revealing" unless they are bent over or sitting with their legs in the air.

Third, my last point suggests you are looking for poses that expose not clothing.

LWulf said:

Hrm...

First, what are the outfits that you have in mind? I hate duplicating efforts.

Second, I've found it is rare that a woman wears clothing that is "pussy and butt hole revealing" even if they are wearing a belt and nothing else.
Since they have internal genetalia, you rarely see anything clearly "revealing" unless they are bent over or sitting with their legs in the air.

Third, my last point suggests you are looking for poses that expose not clothing.

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excellent point!
what sort of situation are these people supposed to be in?
what locations? (a woman who is a whore or working in porn might well display herself that way but where or when else?)
what sort of people? ages? WHY are they dressed like this??

an outfit is stage dressing, you can't just dress a character without knowing what you're dressing her for

LWulf said:

Hrm...

First, what are the outfits that you have in mind? I hate duplicating efforts.
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Also, I'm not trying to be a smart ass. You're having trouble describing what a woman wears that is revealing, but you don't have to use words, just pictures would be help enough to describe what you need help describing.

Also, you seem to be asking for two different things (even though I suggest you are looking for three). You seem to be asking "how to describe other things that women wear" but also "how to describe what I am thinking of"

What nothislady asked is pertinent as well. "Setting" goes far in suggesting appropriate (or appropriately inappropriate) attire.

Easternwindz said:

I'm thinking of writing a story which involves many characters and need help with the description of the dresses/outfits for the ladies. I want the ladies in the story to change outfits several times for different occasions and I'm not so good at describing ladies outfits even though I have the picture in my head. So please share your description for the sluttiest, Skimpiest, no panties, high heels, pussy and butt hole revealing, transparent, shocking outfits etc... you can come up with so that I can use it in my story. please contribute as many outfit ideas as you can... The best descriptions will definitely be featured in my story. Thanks a zilllion!

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There's slutty and there's shocking. Sometimes seeing someone dressed in a way that makes you feel her discomfort, makes you know the knots in her stomach and the anticipation she feels can be every bit as shocking.
This isn't very good but it may be a decent example.

He had said, “Dress so I can see you” those were the only words in the text she had received. She didn’t dare disappoint him but she didn’t know what it meant! Taking one last look at what she did (and didn’t) have on and shuddering with horror she placed her hand on the door and pushed it open.
Her heels were high, six inches at least. The shop had higher ones but these were the highest she could walk in. The Mary Jane strap and shiny buckle on each mimicked far more innocent things than the rest of the design revealed. With them she wore white stockings with tiny pink hearts worked into them. They ended mid-thigh, each topped by a pink satin bow. A sheer baby-doll was the only thing covering her body. It’s ruffled hem barely brushed her hips and reminded her of her near nakedness every time she moved.
The panties had been the thing she spent the most time over. Should she or shouldn’t she?
In the end she put them on. The white lace making her feel even more bare and exposed than nothing at all as it parted the lips of her newly shaved sex and chafed between the cheeks of her virgin ass.
Walking into the room she found it several degrees cooler than the hallway and her nipples were immediately rigid, Plainly visible through the thin fabric of her bodice.
“Dress so I can see you.”
Bare from just below her navel to mid-thigh, breasts pressing against the sheer top so that they were more visible than if they’d been uncovered she certainly felt as though he could see her. The lace between her legs pulled tight reminding her of her nakedness of the bargain she’d made and the things she’d promised.
“Dress so I can see you.”
She felt sure there was no part of her that would remain unseen.

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First of all my apologies for confusing you guys as to what I'm really looking for. Here are some examples which I'm copying from a writer here on lit(without his permission) and I hope he doesn't mind...just for fun I've put the names of some of my fav celebrities instead of the ones in the story Hope i'm making myself clearer now... And when I say "slutty outfits" I do understand its subjective, but then im open to your take on the word and not just my idea of it. Any type of outfit for any occasion would do, just go ahead and describe it in words and not pictures please.

*Katy Perry was wearing a small stretch denim tube top that only covered the middle part of her tits and stretch denim blue shorts that were so tight and so short that the back seam was pressed in her ass crack and the front was outlining her pussy lips clearly. They were low rise so the start of her ass crack was visible and from the short bottoms her ass cheeks were hanging out. And of course, no panties or bra were possible in such skimpy, skin tight clothes even if permitted.

*The dress Beyonce was wearing was a white sprinkly-shiny, halter straps that joined behind her neck and widened a little to press her soft tits, her back totally bare, ending unevenly on one leg on mid-thigh and on the other leg just below her waist. The below waist part was translucent enough to show that she was not wearing panties and when she moved and the dress stuck to her legs. As moved towards me with a sexy smile, putting one leg ahead of the other, the dress stuck to her sexy thigh and outlined her private parts in a very seductive way.

*Rihanna had picked out a green dress, a new one, which was off the shoulder to the extent that her chest was also exposed, no cleavage though. The top part was white lace for 2 inches and after that a soft, thin and see-through, green material coving her body from her tits to upper thighs. Even the boobs area was see-through, not totally transparent but if you were standing close, talking to her at a party, you would be able to see every centimeter of her gorgeous tits including the nipples and areolas.

The dress ended at a dangerous point where her pussy would remain hidden only and only if she stood still with her legs straight. Even if she walked part of her pussy will come into view. And on the back side, I am sure you can guess, the dress covered the curve of her buttocks and went another couple of inches but did not try to boast that it was covering the full ass. It was tight enough that you could see her full breasts being held in place without being pressed and since she was not wearing any bra, her nipples could be seen pressing against the fabric like trying to get out.

She had also chosen to wear silver clear high heels with 7" heel and 3 inch clear platform under the toes. No straps but that was compensated by the two words engraved in rhinestone on the clear instep-strap, the words were "FUCK ME". And she did look totally fuckable...

NotHisLady said:

There's slutty and there's shocking. Sometimes seeing someone dressed in a way that makes you feel her discomfort, makes you know the knots in her stomach and the anticipation she feels can be every bit as shocking.
This isn't very good but it may be a decent example.

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Yes im glad we understand each other well. And the example you gave is a good one. Now any original ideas?

Easternwindz said:

Yes im glad we understand each other well. And the example you gave is a good one. Now any original ideas?

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begging your pardon but that WAS original.

NotHisLady said:

begging your pardon but that WAS original.

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I believe easternwindz was talking about "original" source material that they could use. That sounds like you got it from one of your own stories and thus it would be plagiarism to use it.

LWulf said:

I believe easternwindz was talking about "original" source material that they could use. That sounds like you got it from one of your own stories and thus it would be plagiarism to use it.

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although I admit I do lean towards rather less smutty smut, no it isn't from anything
It isn't very good because I just threw it together as an example of what I was saying, that without setting and at least a little bit of character it's nearly impossible to do an effective descriptive passage.
I don't have any idea who those people are or what comes before or after that scene.

Actually, the "dress so I can see you" part came directly from what the OP claims to be looking for. The request was to write a description of that. I just included the question in the answer.
One too many essay tests I guess.

Rainshine said:

What the fuck is pussy and butt hole revealing clothing? What kind of people dress like that?

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Not quite how I would choose to describe that style of clothing - but yes I have seen this style of clothing worn many times. Usually leather or latex. Who would wear such clothing? Haha, you may be quite surprised how normal they are when you have a conversation.

It is not really who, but for what occasion.

Rainshine said:

What the fuck is pussy and butt hole revealing clothing? What kind of people dress like that?

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The Lustrous one slid her feet into her kangaroo-skin, stiletto Uggs, moved from the bed, and marvelled at herself in the full length mirror. The stretchy denim hugged her flesh like the wheels of pmann's Ferrari hugged the road that summer evening, driving up the Amalfi coast.
Ah, Italy, she sighed, remembering. Milan to Naples. Her butthole, winky and exposed through the crotch-less opening of her slick, smooth, silk Italian panties, kissed the soft seat leather as pmann wove the sports car through the curves.
The panties had been a gift from Hugh, left for her at the hotel in Rome. Wrapped delicately and paired with a matching bra, they came with a short, party dress, all in a shallow black box. The card, monogrammed "H", had 'sorry about the haircut' written in tight, loopy cursive - the type of writing pmann and his engineery type friends referred to as "ghey".
At first she was not sure she could wear the dress. Though it was fine to stand in, once she started to walk the peek-a-boo-b-hole hem rode up her ass cheeks ever so slightly, teasingly revealing her Venetian canals.
The panties were no help. Once she figured out how they fit, the crotch-less feature and tight, lace edging accentuated her newly prominent pussy. If there had been a camel in the next room, she would expect it to stick it's head through the door and ask, "Who the fuck are you?".
Instead of a camel, pmann appeared in the doorway. After a quick double take and low whistle, his eyes lingering and taking in her labial love curtains, he shook the Ferrari's keys and announced, "Let's ride, Funny Face. Let's ride!"

Emerson40 said:

The Lustrous one slid her feet into her kangaroo-skin, stiletto Uggs, moved from the bed, and marvelled at herself in the full length mirror. The stretchy denim hugged her flesh like the wheels of pmann's Ferrari hugged the road that summer evening, driving up the Amalfi coast.
Ah, Italy, she sighed, remembering. Milan to Naples. Her butthole, winky and exposed through the crotch-less opening of her slick, smooth, silk Italian panties, kissed the soft seat leather as pmann wove the sports car through the curves.
The panties had been a gift from Hugh, left for her at the hotel in Rome. Wrapped delicately and paired with a matching bra, they came with a short, party dress, all in a shallow black box. The card, monogrammed "H", had 'sorry about the haircut' written in tight, loopy cursive - the type of writing pmann and his engineery type friends referred to as "ghey".
At first she was not sure she could wear the dress. Though it was fine to stand in, once she started to walk the peek-a-boo-b-hole hem rode up her ass cheeks ever so slightly, teasingly revealing her Venetian canals.
The panties were no help. Once she figured out how they fit, the crotch-less feature and tight, lace edging accentuated her newly prominent pussy. If there had been a camel in the next room, she would expect it to stick it's head through the door and ask, "Who the fuck are you?".
Instead of a camel, pmann appeared in the doorway. After a quick double take and low whistle, his eyes lingering and taking in her labial love curtains, he shook the Ferrari's keys and announced, "Let's ride, Funny Face. Let's ride!"

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haha nice one!

Rainshine said:

What the fuck is pussy and butt hole revealing clothing? What kind of people dress like that?

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All these are in the fantasy section as we all know normal people do not dress this way. Then again, there is our imagination you see

NotHisLady said:

begging your pardon but that WAS original.

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Oh ok, my bad

I just want to get this straight..

you're writing a story..
but you want us to write all the descriptive parts?

Cross dresser

GiggLeGasm said:

I just want to get this straight..

you're writing a story..
but you want us to write all the descriptive parts?

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I think it isn't outlandish to ask for help in knowing terms for descriptive modes of dress of the opposite sex (especially for a guy author trying to describe a girl character's many different and varied forms of dress. I mean seriously, look at the what guys think is okay for Ariel...).
Guys just got no clue!

I would have offered some descriptions but my creativity crashed...