Looking for Any Feedback

I've written perhaps three or four stories for Literotica and I find feedback to be addicting, good or bad. I just like to hear people's thoughts.

If you can take the time to read one, or two, or all of my works, and let me know what you think, I would really appreciate it!

https://literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=808007&page=submissions

I read "Fit Mom Ch 01" and liked it. I thought the sex was very hot. The characters were well drawn and the plot was plausible. I though you had way too much narrative summary at the beginning, but things were fine once I got past that.

My guess as to why the rating isn't higher is that I/T readers want stories where the sex is consensual and leads to a happy ending. Your story isn't that way. It's more realistic that Dad figures everything out and everything winds up in ruins, but does take the fun out of the story.