Looking for an Editor/Reader

I need an editor/beta reader for the first chapter of a Monster girls like story i have written. It's about 8200 words.
My preference is to work through email and/or old microsoft word documents.
It's a loose dark version of "everyday life with monster girls" that takes place before monster girls become public knowledge. It starts where this monster girl meets our hero and begs him to save her and her friends from a group of Japanese mobsters/magic users using the monster girls to fuel ther magic. The monster girl's magic is fueled by sex FTW!

To cover one more thing in the case of this story i'm referring to the term "monster girls" in loose terms and in no way is it a reflection of their age.

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What is it about?

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This sounds like it would break Literotica's rules about under-age sex.

Bramblethorn said:

This sounds like it would break Literotica's rules about under-age sex.

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No i don't think it would because i figure the average mythical non human is probably 50-100 years and they could easily look in their 20's and 30's

secondly i used the phrase

It's a loose dark version of "everyday life with monster girls" that takes place before monster girls become public knowledge

so it's not exactly the same universe.

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