kaleidoscopeyes
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Fun with a few household objects by herself. More of a vignette than a full story. I'd love some comments. https://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?url=feeling-the-burn
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Constructive Criticism Please, first story
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LastLostIdols
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Read it and really liked it, even if it's not a genre that usually interests me. Posted a comment explaining my thoughts on the story.
Keep it up.
--LLI
Keep it up.
--LLI
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