Review and discuss your story?

I'll play.

Could you let me have your thoughts about this one?
https://www.literotica.com/s/swinging-twins

CAVEAT - the ending is a bit of a gut-punch. Some readers were unhappy about that. But I wrote what happened...

It might not meet the 'kink'elements you mentioned in the original post, but it contains some (I think) pretty intense swinger scenes.

Wouldn't mind getting some critique on my stories.

4 pages long, split in two parts: https://www.literotica.com/s/her-first-time-turns-costly-ch-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/her-first-time-turns-costly-ch-02

2 pages: https://www.literotica.com/s/my-newest-coworker

1 page: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-couples-maid

You don't have to read all of them if you don't want to, of course.