I just finished part III of a four-part series. Entitled Discovering Sarah. I self-edited the first two. They were well received but, predictably, I got called out on the many typos I missed. Live and learn!
Here are the details... The story weighs in at about 17300 words. It is mostly clean but needs another set of eyes. I am principally looking for help with typo's, missing words and grammar issues, although I would appreciate content feedback.
The style is better categorized as erotica rather than porn. The story explores sexuality and guilt; it story contains straight sex, girl on girl, group, submission, and bondage.
If your interested send me a PM.
here is a link to the series if you want to check out the first two. https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4211719&page=submissions
Eros_Diem
Here are the details... The story weighs in at about 17300 words. It is mostly clean but needs another set of eyes. I am principally looking for help with typo's, missing words and grammar issues, although I would appreciate content feedback.
The style is better categorized as erotica rather than porn. The story explores sexuality and guilt; it story contains straight sex, girl on girl, group, submission, and bondage.
If your interested send me a PM.
here is a link to the series if you want to check out the first two. https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4211719&page=submissions
Eros_Diem
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