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DarkPleasures
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I just wanted to share this little tid-bit from a story I had been working on years ago to get opinions. Working title: Pretty Baby.
She stumbled awkwardly down the loose-gravel alleyway as best she could in her five inch stilettos. Her lips were painted a bold cherry red, her eyes darker than night. She looked lovely, there was no doubt, but she would look even lovlier before this was all over.
Just ahead of her, the alleyway dead-ended. The row of long-abandoned businesses in this desolate little strip mall formed an "L" back here. To the left, a nearly eight foot chainlink fence lined the whole length of the neglected alley, separating it from the unusual inner city forest of trees.
It was like a mini Central Park minus the park benches, joggers, and winos. It was another great location; easy pickings for some of the city's ever growing low-life population. But tonight the alley won. A mass-mail went out to the usual suspects. They were informed that the night would be oral only, but that there was no holds barred, and to spread the word. At five dollars a pop it would be a busy night!
She stumbled awkwardly down the loose-gravel alleyway as best she could in her five inch stilettos. Her lips were painted a bold cherry red, her eyes darker than night. She looked lovely, there was no doubt, but she would look even lovlier before this was all over.
Just ahead of her, the alleyway dead-ended. The row of long-abandoned businesses in this desolate little strip mall formed an "L" back here. To the left, a nearly eight foot chainlink fence lined the whole length of the neglected alley, separating it from the unusual inner city forest of trees.
It was like a mini Central Park minus the park benches, joggers, and winos. It was another great location; easy pickings for some of the city's ever growing low-life population. But tonight the alley won. A mass-mail went out to the usual suspects. They were informed that the night would be oral only, but that there was no holds barred, and to spread the word. At five dollars a pop it would be a busy night!