8letters
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My Day as a Pool Boy was my Summer Lovin' contest entry. Author's notes for the story are here. The story has a number of first for me. I did well with it as it has a score of 4.68 and is #6 on the Top Stories Read in Last 30 Days list. But as always, I'm looking to get better. I would greatly appreciate advice on how to improve. I don't mind harsh feedback as long as it's constructive.