UnderYourSpell
Gerund Whore
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Thank you for the mention Angeline ...... it's been a while
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You can always post your poems on the forum and ask for feedback if you want. People do that all the time and though you may not get as many views here, you'll probably get more detailed feedback. That's not really a solution, I know, but more of a work-around.
I will keep that in mind. Thank you. I think that most of the comments I receive on my poetry comes from the forum regulars anyways. Perhaps this would be the better venue for the overall evolution of my work. Which thread would I post under? I wouldn't want to clutter a thread inappropriately. Thank you for the advice, I appreciate it.
Thank you to Todski for the mention and comments also the comments from Oneiria, Angeline, Tzara and Harry. Hope everyone got the significance of *Down* on the shore? #smirk
I did not but that's because where I grew up everyone referred to visiting the beach as going "down the shore." Really! In fact, when I read the poem I thought "how did she know about that?" I guess New Jersey is a naturally pervy place.
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I wanted to thank Angeline and todski for their comments on Fast Rage, and maybe talk a bit about it, if you are okay with that.
Sure Wd, we can talk about your poem. We can do that here or in a thread or a private message, whatever works for you. Just let me know.
Okay. Fast Rage Is one a handful of poems written in certain state. I don't typically know how they come out until the next day when I go back to read them. I seem to post them while in that mindset, so they are going up as (in my opinion, at least) really strong or really weak, and sometimes broken or fragmented. Do you think it would be worthwhile to repost a fixed version of the weaker works when this happens, or just let them rest in peace?
I have worked out a solution to the posting problem in this, I will simply disconnect my router before I get to that point, so I can't post something until I have a chance to review it the next day. I write while intoxicated to a certain extant in everything I do, as I am on a constant regimen of medications, but sometimes the dosages of the nerve blockers and muscle relaxers go very high and that is when I run into this problem. I was just wondering if I should rework and repost broken poems.
Wd, here is the quote from the FAQ.
I've re-edited my story and want to replace the posted version with my new edited one. How do I do this?
No problem! Simply submit the new version as you submitted the old one, only adding the word "EDITED" to the title (ex. "My Sexy Firefighter Ch. 03 - EDITED") so that we know to replace the old text with the new text. We will then replace the original text with the new text. Your story will retain its previous voting score and views.
To Wakingdown your writing is powerful, almost everything I have read of yours has emoted something from me. I find it hard to believe that you are new to poetry as well. You have an amazing ability to convey emotion through the written word. If what you are posting is unedited then it is astounding. I am sorry for your situation, but happy to read your work.
Edited to add thank you to Angeline for your strong work as a forum operator and for taking the time to post comments in posts, to help teach and grow new poets and to argue strongly with or against the longer serving poets. Thank you to all others on here that have commented on anything I have posted.
To Wakingdown your writing is powerful, almost everything I have read of yours has emoted something from me. I find it hard to believe that you are new to poetry as well. You have an amazing ability to convey emotion through the written word. If what you are posting is unedited then it is astounding. I am sorry for your situation, but happy to read your work.
Edited to add thank you to Angeline for your strong work as a forum operator and for taking the time to post comments in posts, to help teach and grow new poets and to argue strongly with or against the longer serving poets. Thank you to all others on here that have commented on anything I have posted.
Is there such thing as a 'list poem'? What I mean is does a list of statements still make it a poem? I've just read what seems to but just that in New Poems
Annie's little poem is the poem of the week for me. Love the comparison.well she got an E and a 5 from me, take a bow underyourspell
ahh the joys (sarcasm) of life in two lines.
http://www.literotica.com/p/approaching-old-age
Is there such thing as a 'list poem'? What I mean is does a list of statements still make it a poem? I've just read what seems to but just that in New Poems
Bronzeage posted a good one a couple of weeks ago that Angeline commented on