sinfuldeeds
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Reviews for first story?
I hadn't intended to ask for reviews, since this is my first story, I didn't use an editor, and I have already found errors. However I seem to have asked a question in the wrong forum - this one. So since I have this post here, I might as well edit and use it!
My name: Sinfuldeeds
Name of Story: Call Me Daddy Ch. 01
Category: Incest. Also contains elements of BDSM. It IS rough, so be warned if that is not something you are into.
So I wrote an incest story - primarily a stroker. There are hints of future plot though, particularly a changing of atittudes the two main characters will have towards each other by the end of the tale.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?url=call-me-daddy-ch-01
Thank you all for your time!
I hadn't intended to ask for reviews, since this is my first story, I didn't use an editor, and I have already found errors. However I seem to have asked a question in the wrong forum - this one. So since I have this post here, I might as well edit and use it!
My name: Sinfuldeeds
Name of Story: Call Me Daddy Ch. 01
Category: Incest. Also contains elements of BDSM. It IS rough, so be warned if that is not something you are into.
So I wrote an incest story - primarily a stroker. There are hints of future plot though, particularly a changing of atittudes the two main characters will have towards each other by the end of the tale.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?url=call-me-daddy-ch-01
Thank you all for your time!
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