JakeBNice
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- Feb 20, 2014
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Roughly 80-90% complete with the content of my first submission. I'm taking some time to go back over the first section and re-read it for continuity as I wrap up the story.
As I'm doing this, I'm trimming down sentences I find to have unnecessary adjectives or are too wordy, or just information I realize isn't pertinent to moving the story along.
I feel I'm doing right by this, but also thought I might be shooting myself in the foot by removing some of the color from my writing and leaving it too sparse.
Is it better to let someone else do a majority of your editing since you might be biased to the content since you wrote it? Or might be too self-critical?
Sorry if this is a basic/silly question. I was more of a music/art guy in school and never took a writing class. Only recently developed an interest in writing despite being a long-time reader.
Any input would be great.
Thanks.
As I'm doing this, I'm trimming down sentences I find to have unnecessary adjectives or are too wordy, or just information I realize isn't pertinent to moving the story along.
I feel I'm doing right by this, but also thought I might be shooting myself in the foot by removing some of the color from my writing and leaving it too sparse.
Is it better to let someone else do a majority of your editing since you might be biased to the content since you wrote it? Or might be too self-critical?
Sorry if this is a basic/silly question. I was more of a music/art guy in school and never took a writing class. Only recently developed an interest in writing despite being a long-time reader.
Any input would be great.
Thanks.