pocketrocket
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I have an adult trilogy, plus one. It was well received, except in the BDSM community, which complain it is not realistic. I would change that if I could, but it was not written as a BDSM story. You will see links in my sig.
The trilogy is about two dissimilar people who meet, work together, date and marry--all in three weeks. I know that is strange. That is why the story is worth telling. The male character's younger sister enters halfway through book 2. She grew to be a serious enough character that I wrote her story. The link is below. The story covers about 20 years, with an epilogue.
The trilogy is very much a Literotica story--sex, bondage, floggings, you get the picture. I have had an actual Dom say that one scene scared the shit out of him. Too realistic, with too much chance of ambulances and police.
The sister's story is not. It is more an R rating, with references to heavier things off camera. Since it is potentially available to a general market, I would like feedback on the story as a stand alone. The story comes in seven parts, totaling about novel length. Most of the available material, ie from the trilogy, goes in part 2, chapters 7 and 8. She essentially runs the wedding preparations.
https://www.literotica.com/s/little-sister-13
Thank you for your consideration. Feel free to emial me through the site.
The trilogy is about two dissimilar people who meet, work together, date and marry--all in three weeks. I know that is strange. That is why the story is worth telling. The male character's younger sister enters halfway through book 2. She grew to be a serious enough character that I wrote her story. The link is below. The story covers about 20 years, with an epilogue.
The trilogy is very much a Literotica story--sex, bondage, floggings, you get the picture. I have had an actual Dom say that one scene scared the shit out of him. Too realistic, with too much chance of ambulances and police.
The sister's story is not. It is more an R rating, with references to heavier things off camera. Since it is potentially available to a general market, I would like feedback on the story as a stand alone. The story comes in seven parts, totaling about novel length. Most of the available material, ie from the trilogy, goes in part 2, chapters 7 and 8. She essentially runs the wedding preparations.
https://www.literotica.com/s/little-sister-13
Thank you for your consideration. Feel free to emial me through the site.
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