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Want writers feedback

Thread starter toetyper
Start date Aug 24, 2017

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toetyper

Experienced

Aug 24, 2017

#1

i want feed back on my story. i know that the subject matter wont be everyones cup of tea. i just want opinions on the quality of the writing.,

https://www.literotica.com/s/driving-in-the-rain-1

jellogrl

Really Experienced

Aug 24, 2017

#2

toetyper said:
i want feed back on my story. i know that the subject matter wont be everyones cup of tea. i just want opinions on the quality of the writing.,

https://www.literotica.com/s/driving-in-the-rain-1

A fun story, and given the character's disabilities, a pretty unique story as far as I've personally read. I sent some minor tweaks to you in your messenger. Thanks for the read.

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EquinoxRising

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Aug 25, 2017

#3

toetyper said:
i want feed back on my story. i know that the subject matter wont be everyones cup of tea. i just want opinions on the quality of the writing.,

https://www.literotica.com/s/driving-in-the-rain-1

Is this post an example of the writing quality? What category is it in? If it's not everyone's "cuppa" I'd like to know what it's about before reading.

rutger5

Really Really Experienced

Aug 25, 2017

#4

^^^^^

I think it isn't everyone's cup of tea because main characters are handicapped/have cerebral palsy.

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