HisArpy
Loose canon extraordinair
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Ok, so Laurel apparently decided it passed the not-verbotten test and wasn't too horrible so my first Lit contribution is published.
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-winner-1
Thanks to Saucyminx for her time and effort in reading and editing. I did add a little bit to the story since you saw it but not too much - only around 5k words or so.
Feedback is appreciated, this is my first attempt at 1st person female POV. Also, I don't know why the paragraph indents are missing, they are there in the original. Any ideas on that?
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-winner-1
Thanks to Saucyminx for her time and effort in reading and editing. I did add a little bit to the story since you saw it but not too much - only around 5k words or so.
Feedback is appreciated, this is my first attempt at 1st person female POV. Also, I don't know why the paragraph indents are missing, they are there in the original. Any ideas on that?
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