Short Story/Confessional

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The idea of the feedback forum is to get more detailed reader/ writer input on a story that has been published on Lit - but not to post material here. Whilst your story does not contain content that breaches any Lit rules, you have posted without first seeking the site editor's approval.

I suggest you expand the story to the minimum 750 words and submit it for publication - then, once it's published, come back to this forum and post a link.

The applicable category is "Loving Wives". I also suggest you familiarise yourself with the readership there, before you write more...

electricblue66 said:

I suggest you expand the story to the minimum 750 words and submit it for publication - then, once it's published, come back to this forum and post a link.

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Thanks!