Blueeyesrenee
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I walk into the bar and plop myself down on the bar stool, grumbling about my sister. How dare she do this to me, we both agreed that we would talk this over with Dad before we moved Mom. I look up and see the bartender and order a glass of white wine.
"If you don't mind me asking, what was up with your mood as you came in?" he asked.
I laughed and started to tell him about the fight my sister and I had.
His hand was very nice and soft. Also rather large and firm I noticed as his hand warmly shook mine. I took a drink from my glass feeling the wine starting to go to my head. I feel myself loosen up, I scoot a tad closer to him, my hand brushing over his arm. He doesn't back away from me, I notice.
You did jump tenses; I personally don't think it matters if you choose present tense (I walk towards the bar) or past tense (I walked towards the bar). As a whole, I think a majority of people who read fiction prefer past tense, while a lot of those who do some sort of online role playing often gravitate towards present tense.