Looking for some feedback

Decided to finally craft a story that has been in my head for years. I've slowly chipped away at it with limited hours between work and life. I'd say the first 70% is complete (not gone back over with a fine comb though) and the last 30% is completed for content and notes and just needs to be finalized in a more finish form.

Looking for some feedback and perspective on the storyline and some opinion on length (that's what she said...ok, couldn't resist that )

It's a reality based story on a mid 40's married couple and a neighbor that re-ignites a spark in a way neither would have thought. It does involve two women so my preference would be a female perspective on that dynamic.

Would love to see if anyone is willing to discuss a little and offer some opinion.

I'm not good in English and in fact I took help from editors to edit my story. But I can provide feedback or suggestions from a female perspective, you can message me if you want .

I'm a woman but don't much like reading about two women. Do you have a link?