holden_caulfield
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- Feb 4, 2016
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I posted my first story here not long ago. The first two parts have been reviewed alright and I've gotten some nice comments, which is encouraging, but nothing that really helps me get better as a writer. What I'm really looking for is an outside perspective: what worked, what didn't, if you noticed pacing problems, if you were able to identify with one of the character, etc. If anyone here could spare the time to give me some feedback, I'd appreciate it. I submitted under "first time" but it got classified as "Gay male".
https://www.literotica.com/s/senior-year-pt-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/senior-year-pt-02
https://www.literotica.com/s/senior-year-pt-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/senior-year-pt-02