Hi everyone.
If you've got a few minutes to spare, would anyone be willing to check out my latest story 'The Morning After' and offer some feedback? For this one I wanted to see if I could write about two people who've already had sex before the story starts and still make it engaging.
This one is much shorter than the first one I did and is only one page long. I didn't spend nearly as much time on it either, but I'd be interested to know your thoughts;
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?url=the-morning-after-62
Thanks
If you've got a few minutes to spare, would anyone be willing to check out my latest story 'The Morning After' and offer some feedback? For this one I wanted to see if I could write about two people who've already had sex before the story starts and still make it engaging.
This one is much shorter than the first one I did and is only one page long. I didn't spend nearly as much time on it either, but I'd be interested to know your thoughts;
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?url=the-morning-after-62
Thanks