I posted my first story "Gregory's awakening" I know it is a train wreck. I have already gone back over the story and cleaned it up a lot. I honestly didn't expect it to be approved. I am scrambling to fix it. Would anyone be willing to look through the latest round of editing I have done? Also I really don't know the nuances of working with all of you editors on here so if I am doing this wrong please let me know. I didn't want to just attach the story here unless it what I am supposed to do.