avenging angel

[surferchick88]

Hey all writers out there.
The name of this topic is Story Ideas...well and I have one. Guess never put in a sotry yeah well not so far I know.
It is about a gorgeous beauty. The perfect dream of a man. The girl is around 21 and she just got one AIM.Revenge.
Cause in her City the bad guys rules. They humiliate Girls and let them down like trash... They have a porn page...where they put on their hidden Cam Videos of how the girls suffer. These Group of guys sets a lot of fear to all girls around...
But this one girl has the aim... to get these guys down...Some smaller one, she already got down. But here great aim is the leading circle...
These Guys but heard about the Avenging angel for the girls and set up a trap for her....
You need more input ask me...

 

[extreme_hetro_sex]

Do you want to write the story or write the RP?

 

[MyRubiLips]

Do you want to write the story or write the RP?

You do know you bumped a thread from 2012, right?

 

[Hypoxia]

You do know you bumped a thread from 2012, right?

And the OP hasn't posted for a year. Sayonara, motherfucker.

Other than that, the bunny has legs in a cartoonish sort of way. A cabal of Bad Boys focused on female humiliation meet their match in an Avenging Angel who not-so-subtly destroys them. Angel was just a girl when they led her down the garden path to hell. Now she's older, wiser, transformed by self-discipline and maybe a mentor, and she has a plan. A glory hole may be involved. Or tentacles.

 

[extreme_hetro_sex]

You do know you bumped a thread from 2012, right?

I know that but I found it interesting. May be beacause I want to do some non-consent stories.

 

[MyRubiLips]

I know that but I found it interesting. May be beacause I want to do some non-consent stories.

Well, if it inspires you then more power to you!

 

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[Hypoxia]

I actually like the idea as well. More from the comic book geek angle though.

As in, Angel is a comic book geek who transforms for vengeance, or what?

So during the day she wears baggy sweats and a headband, and she geeks around; but at night she strips down to ninja straps under her Little Black Dress, revealing her hard body and steely-eyed determination. Her Come Fuck Me four-inch heels' injector needles squirt poison into the Bad Boys whose feet she stomps while dancing; not deadly poison, only chemical castration. Her sharp fingernails are similarly laced with hallucinogens, Cat Scratch Fever for sure. And she's a geek, remember? She invented a little device (looks like a thin jade bracelet) that sniffs date rape drugs. She dances with, and scratches, and stomps-injects any guy carrying said drugs, as well as those she identifies as Bad Boys.

Then, how does it play out? Does Angel get sufficient vengeance? Is she trapped and played? Does superheroine Angel need a Bad Boy supervillain to keep the story franchise going? Does she start a League of Angels to save the world's women from Bad Boys? Does she get a comic sidekick?

 

[lovecraft68]

What's the big deal? The OP perfectly described lit and its general opinion of women. Lit.... where rape rules and feminism is a dirty word.

 

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[Hypoxia]

I can see (and have sort of plotted) this playing out something like this:
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Again, it's a good intro, but how does it play out? How do you see her resolve her life/afterlife? Is this an infinite series? Does she endlessly pursue endless miscreants? Does she run up against her match? Do the Powers-That-Be think she's gone overboard, and punish or limit her? Does she reach a point where she's done what she needed and is now superfluous? What happens?

 

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[Hypoxia]

And there's the writing part; the part I usually hold back until I send it to my Beta Reader.

Being coy, now, are we?

 

[BurningMonkey]

Forget all that other superfluous nonsense--what about the tentacles??

 

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[Hypoxia]

Play the supernatural angle right and there could be tentacles!

Or even spider legs -- cf Widow (Avatar Comics).