greenmountaineer
Literotica Guru
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Whatever have you against Sponge Bob
is a good question what with the tv
jingling like a mad tea kettle whistles
from another planet about vanilla
flavored bug spray pineapples under
the sea the whole electric buzz
of the universe our evolutionary pro-
gress as seen by carnival touts
and mad men.
Oh mother for a summer's day
when we'd pat lilac talcum
on our wrists, pass the time
talking of the garden how the
pole beans were coming along.
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sight: ski slope
sound: barking
scent: cologne
taste: ice
touch: your choice
Nice contrasts between the two stanzas at so many levels.