robertreams
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Below find an excerpt from a story I am currently penning. I am attempting to write a modern update of a story called "The Enchanted Cottage", in which two lovers, on emotionally scared, the other horribly scared in the face see in other as beautiful only in the enchanted cottage. Well in my story, it is only in the yahoo Chatroom that either of them is perceived as beautiful, and then only to each other. Will they ever meet and if they do, will they be beautiful? Stay tuned. . .
Anyway my question is : does using the preface to each line as the Yahoo user id, as would occur in chat make the whole thing more realistic or only more boring? Also, How about using chat conventions such as "Y" "u" "2" "4", etc?
gingerman41: “Explorer, you there?”
explorer12: “were hav u been?”
For the fortieth time, John sent her a request for PM. What made this request different, she couldn't say. Perhaps it was bigdickman9 and the others' intrusion into her privacy. She okayed the PM.
Anyway my question is : does using the preface to each line as the Yahoo user id, as would occur in chat make the whole thing more realistic or only more boring? Also, How about using chat conventions such as "Y" "u" "2" "4", etc?
gingerman41: “Explorer, you there?”
explorer12: “were hav u been?”
For the fortieth time, John sent her a request for PM. What made this request different, she couldn't say. Perhaps it was bigdickman9 and the others' intrusion into her privacy. She okayed the PM.
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