Young stripper's identity is revealed.

[DarkPleasures]

Okay, so I know the idea is pretty cliché and I'm certain it's been done here at Lit, but I still want to try my take on it. Young lady, between 18 to 21, begins stripping to either help pay for college or give her spending money if tuition is paid for. One night while dancing, _*_____________ comes in and either "catches" her dancing (their eyes meet, she sees him as she turns on stage, and she looks like a deer in the headlights) or sees her without being seen.

Who is " * "? Brother? (If so, older or younger?) Father? Step-father? Father of a friend of hers? Father's close friend? Uncle? (If so, blood related or married in?) Old HS teacher? College professor? Et cetera, et cetera.

Also, is it too cliché to have * blackmail her? Too cliché to have her "turn into a cock-hungry whore shortly after the blackmail"? I'd love to hear other people's opinions to the questions I have asked.

Thanks!

 

[emap]

Honestly, being a stripper is not that bad of a thing. Unless she is going to be a school teacher nobody cares.

Would have to be a seriously religious family to not admit to being a stripper, forget the stories most strippers do not have sex for money. Now if we are talking about a senator's wife and she did it in college under another name that would be a blackmail situation, he probably would not get elected again. Depends greatly on the state he is a senator of.

That said, a brother coming in to watch her strip would be rather deep in what the fuck territory. At least for me, and probably most women. Same with any member of the family. Now if you want to go there well freak city and if say brother asks for a lap dance in the private room it can go to sex.

Alternately, college student and there is this one really hot guy she is lusting after but not approached. He comes in and watches, then asks for a private lap dance. I can so see that going to sex.

I already mentioned most strippers don't do sex for money. If she is willing to engage in it some to most strip joints will let her engage in sex in the private room. Now if the cops come or somebody walks in on it she is getting fired but unless that happens they don't really care, private room and consenting adults.

 

[MatthewVett]

Honestly, being a stripper is not that bad of a thing. Unless she is going to be a school teacher nobody cares.

You really think that if your boss found out you used to be a stripper, he'd treat you the exact same? That that boy you have a crush on would treat you the exact same? You don't think there's any societal taboo against stripping for money, except for school teachers? You really, truly think that?

 

[Sean Renaud]

It's pretty much true. Emap covered all the weaknesses in the story. Being a stripper simply isn't bad enough unless you've got some other detail to add on top of that. She's particularly well off, she's political, she's a teacher or perhaps a cop. Something else has to be there to make this a world ending scenario.

However this (if you take out family) becomes an interesting case of how much was she really blackmailed? I think most schools have at least one teacher that the girls wouldn't say no to. What happens when he spots a girl he recognizes and threatens her? She's not so much being taken advantage of as she is giving in.

 

[DarkPleasures]

So, too cliché for me to consider this?

 

[Teenidle]

I don't think it's cliche, just a question of... how far would she be willing to go blackmail wise.

If it was me, I'd be incredibly embarrassed but if I was willing to expose myself to members of the general public and be paid, I'd probably prefer that my loved ones know than that I do anything too coercive. Photographs might be different though.

So deer in headlights is fine, he sees her and comes up with a cunning plan to trap her is fine - but you're probably looking at overcoming reluctance, rather than her refusal.

Just my two cents

 

[i_would]

Blackmail can go both ways.

Person "catching" her being a dancer/stripper by night while being something perfectly decent by day, may also be in a situation where he doesn't like it to come out that he visits strip clubs. Like the aforementioned senator, or other politician. Or simply some guy whose wife doesn't know he goes there (and, presumably, would not be happy with it).

Interesting situation may arise if the woman stripper in question is e.g. the personal assistant of that man.

 

[boutrosboutros]

Honestly, being a stripper is not that bad of a thing. Unless she is going to be a school teacher nobody cares.

Would have to be a seriously religious family to not admit to being a stripper, forget the stories most strippers do not have sex for money. Now if we are talking about a senator's wife and she did it in college under another name that would be a blackmail situation, he probably would not get elected again. Depends greatly on the state he is a senator of.

That said, a brother coming in to watch her strip would be rather deep in what the fuck territory. At least for me, and probably most women. Same with any member of the family. Now if you want to go there well freak city and if say brother asks for a lap dance in the private room it can go to sex.

Alternately, college student and there is this one really hot guy she is lusting after but not approached. He comes in and watches, then asks for a private lap dance. I can so see that going to sex.

I already mentioned most strippers don't do sex for money. If she is willing to engage in it some to most strip joints will let her engage in sex in the private room. Now if the cops come or somebody walks in on it she is getting fired but unless that happens they don't really care, private room and consenting adults.

It's pretty much true. Emap covered all the weaknesses in the story. Being a stripper simply isn't bad enough unless you've got some other detail to add on top of that. She's particularly well off, she's political, she's a teacher or perhaps a cop. Something else has to be there to make this a world ending scenario.

However this (if you take out family) becomes an interesting case of how much was she really blackmailed? I think most schools have at least one teacher that the girls wouldn't say no to. What happens when he spots a girl he recognizes and threatens her? She's not so much being taken advantage of as she is giving in.

My ex girlfriend became a stripper, and she never told her parents. I think she gave it up about 8 years ago and to my knowledge she's still never told them. I don't think it's so far-fetched that somebody would try to keep it a secret, really.

I agree the teacher or professor scenario is more interesting, though, for the reasons Sean says.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

what about this:

I think it could be the brother. Only the stage is lit, the rest is pretty dark, so he can see her, but she can't see him. When he recognizes her, he moves as close to the stage as possible, without being seen by her. He pays close attention to every detail of her body. Her boobs, her pussy, her butthole ... everything.

Later, he starts to jack off, while he thinks about her hot body. From that day on, he masturbates many times, while thinking about her body. He wants to see her again, but the entry fee is pretty high ... also, he would love to have a private show. But he knows, private shows costs even more ...

So finally, he has an idea. Maybe he should just ask her at home. If it would work, it would be cool, and if not, he still could blackmail her.

He approaches her at home. "I have to talk to you. A few days ago, I was at the strip club. I saw you, doing a striptease."
"And, did you like it?"
"Sure, it was hot as hell. I would love to see it again, but I can't afford it. So I thought I could ask you for a private show, here at home."
"Well, basically, I don't care if I dance at the club or at home - but I can't do it for free. However, since you are my brother, I will give you a special price. $20 - including a lap dance."

Brother agrees. During the lap dance, he can't help himself, he has to touch her.
"Hey, you are not allowed to touch the dancers during a lap dance."
"I am sorry, but I couldn't resist. You are so hot."
"Oh come on, I am your sister. You shouldn't touch me. At least not like that."
"Well, if you would prefer it, I could touch you with my tongue ... at least down there ..."
"You really would do that? All the way, until I cum? Prove it."

So sister places her pussy near his face and he starts to lick her ... not only her pussy but maybe even her butthole ...

 

[LWulf]

Going to PM you about this as what I say might be showing too much of a story if you use the concept.

 

[SkylarFalling]

Sorry to interrupt but is being a stripper really not that bad?

Maybe it's UK/US thing, because I've lived in the UK all my life and never even seen a strip club, so I'm thinking the taboo keeps them fairly well hidden.

I've nothing personally against strippers, I just know there would undoubtedly be an awful reaction if anyone who knew me ever found out I'd even been i a bloody strip club, let alone been a stripper. I haven't but hypothetically. And we're not even religious.

Aren't the differences in attitude between places odd?

I have been educated today, thanks.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Really, I hadn't heard much about the UK specifically but everybody who's been to Europe always talks about how nobody is as prudish as us Americans.

 

[sr71plt]

Who is " * "? Brother? (If so, older or younger?) Father? Step-father? Father of a friend of hers? Father's close friend? Uncle? (If so, blood related or married in?) Old HS teacher? College professor? Et cetera, et cetera.

What I'd like to see developed in such a story is the man being her mother's boyfriend or something other than the tired old brother/father of the incest stories. Of course the readership of the latter would be higher.

 

[lovecraft68]

I think the spin should go the other way

Ever see those insane hen party sites like dancing bear where the women are sucking off the strippers?

Kids twenty and built and hung and stripping for money (but wears a mask) he is doing his thing one night when Oh, shit!

His mother is one of the women.

he sees her as he is only about ten feet away with some over heated housewife sucking his cock.

he tries to angle away, but the girls are calling to him and he turns and sees his mother holding up money, he slowly goes over, gives her a shake and tries to move away, but

she grabs his cock and goes to suck it. If he doesn't let ehr he could lose his job and she doesn't know its him and


what does he do?

You figure it out, It's just some random crap that entered my head just now.

 

[loquere]

You really think that if your boss found out you used to be a stripper, he'd treat you the exact same? That that boy you have a crush on would treat you the exact same? You don't think there's any societal taboo against stripping for money, except for school teachers? You really, truly think that?

http://www.literotica.com/s/risky-business-3

The above is a story where a former prostitute is outed by her new boss, who is a former client. He attempts to blackmail her.

 

[loquere]

Being a stripper isn't bad at all.

 

[RicoLouis]

Yes stripping isn't that bad yet women get fired for doing it in the past all the time. Though to be fair they probably didn't list it on there resume under skills.

 

[SecondCircle]

What I'd like to see developed in such a story is the man being her mother's boyfriend or something other than the tired old brother/father of the incest stories. Of course the readership of the latter would be higher.

Yeah I'm kinda with this. Incest is a great taboo and serves many for a tantalizing shock of sexual pleasure, but I don't think every single story needs incest to add that extra "punch" of shock. This idea would work great with the man being someone familiar and close to the girl, without being blood relatives. Mom's boyfriend, her husband's best friend, or even HER best friend. Lil bit of lesbian action for that genre to enjoy or something. I think any of that would be shocker enough for good tension within the story.

Good story idea, too, I might add. The funny thing about clichés is that they are clichés for a good reason. Because usually they work. And if they're done right, they will still be enjoyable and make for a great fucking story.

 

[SkylarFalling]

Really, I hadn't heard much about the UK specifically but everybody who's been to Europe always talks about how nobody is as prudish as us Americans.

I think people are more sexually open with each other, if that makes sense, but I wouldn't shout about having been to a strip club. Somehow it is different. Obviously, it might come across differently if I ever spoke to people about it, but the fact that I've never even heard people talking about it kind of hints to me that nobody does for a reason.

I don't know. I live in a fairly small city but I've not seen them in the bigger cities. Mystery.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I think the spin should go the other way

Ever see those insane hen party sites like dancing bear where the women are sucking off the strippers?

Kids twenty and built and hung and stripping for money (but wears a mask) he is doing his thing one night when Oh, shit!

His mother is one of the women.

he sees her as he is only about ten feet away with some over heated housewife sucking his cock.

he tries to angle away, but the girls are calling to him and he turns and sees his mother holding up money, he slowly goes over, gives her a shake and tries to move away, but

she grabs his cock and goes to suck it. If he doesn't let ehr he could lose his job and she doesn't know its him and


what does he do?

You figure it out, It's just some random crap that entered my head just now.

I also know this websites about women that give striptease guys a blowjob. But I can't believe that this is real. I think they are all professionals.

Of course, it would be even hotter, if it would be real ... who knows.

I once saw a report on tv, about a strip club. I think it was in Mexico or some other south american state. The unusual thing was: once she was nude, the striptease dancer crawled around on stage. And the guys who were standing around the stage groped her. Most grabed her boobs, but one guy even put his hand between her thighs. She pulled the hand away, but a second later, he put it back at her pussy.

As far as I know, usually you are not allowed to touch the dancers - especially, when they are very close, like at a lapdance.

But imagine, there is this new, special club, where touching is allowed. The dancers (or at least some of them) wear facemasks. So the guys can touch the girls, the only rule is: keep your dick in your pants. But besides that, touching, fingering, licking, etc. is fine.
But maybe there is even a 2nd room, where EVERYTHING goes, including fucking.

So imagine, there is this girl, doing a striptease. Then the touching starts. Due to the facemask, her vision is limited. She feels a hand on her butt. It moves towards her butthole and starts to rub it, almost painful. She turns around and hisses at the guy to be more gentle. But then she is shocked, because now that she looks right into his face, she recognizes him ...

 

[Sengar]

My take on this would be to have a friend of the stripper's come into the club, with her (the friend's) boyfriend. The happy couple then requests a private show from the stripper, and it goes from there...

 

[DarkPleasures]

My take on this would be to have a friend of the stripper's come into the club, with her (the friend's) boyfriend. The happy couple then requests a private show from the stripper, and it goes from there...

That could be a fun angle. Does the couple already know the friend works there or no?

 

[Sengar]

That could be a fun angle. Does the couple already know the friend works there or no?

I think that would be up to the author and how they want to play the situation

It would be a fun twist, though, to have the couple pretend they didn't know she worked there, but reveal at the end that one of them did and orchestrated the whole event without the other two being aware. Because they like sharing.

If I was doing the story, it would be the girlfriend who arranged the evening...but that's me, and I am not likely to write this anytime in the near future. The author needs to go where their muse takes them.

 

[langdangsilver]

That could be a fun angle. Does the couple already know the friend works there or no?

Very sexy, what about a taboo known guy getting erect?