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[muddpuppy]

Please forgive me, i have no idea where to post erotic poetry, i guess i will do it here. Any comments would be great! Thanx.

you fill me full of poison...
you make me scared inside...
you keep my blood pumping...
you make me wanna hide...
you dig your nails into my skin...
you make me want your touch...
as i close my eyes i realize...
im enjoying this too much...
you look at me and bite your lips...
you start to pull my hair...
you grind your teeth at the smell of flesh...
evil is in the air...
i begin to tremble...
you stand above me proud...
you throw your head back, shove it in...
you make me scream out loud,
"master, please have mercy!"
"i cant hardly take no more!"
you sink your teeth into my neck and say,
"submit you little whore!"
you tear me up more and more
with every single thrust...
the pain i need endure...
the pleasure is a must...
the tears of pain roll down my face...
as i moan and cry...
you stop a minute and look at me...
as if to wonder why???
you wrap your fingers around my throat...
you ask me hows it feel???
i stole your heart when i said...
it makes me feel so REAL...

 

[Lovernotkiller]

Well, there is a special section for stories that if you look around you will find. But as far as the poetry goes, sounds like you like it rough and dirty . Like a giveing head poetry kind of like that nickleback song....but yea it's a naughty in a good way poem/story, thats my input on it.

 

[LadyJeanne]

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