"You Have One Minute Remaining"......(in phone sex!) by Wicked Eve

[tigerjen]

This one rings (no pun intended!) true to me....I love having
phone sex with a partner......the words hit home to me.......
and esp. I get turned on by the power of a man's voice.......

"You Have One Minute Remaining"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=29885

 

[TheDR4KE]

very nice...

I loved the rhythm of the poem, and the atmosphere you set up with the first couple of stanzas. I was hoping for a little more interaction though ... the feel shifts from a moody piece, nervousness and excitement captured so well, to a playful memory in the last few lines.

But then ... I guess that's how it is sometimes ;-)

Drake

 

[WickedEve]

the feel shifts from a moody piece, nervousness and excitement captured so well, to a playful memory in the last few lines.

TheDR4KE, thanks for the comments. The nervousness and excitement is something I still feel after 2 years with the same lover. But by the end of the conversation, we're laughing and talking. And the phone card has run out a few times. Sometimes at a very arousing moment!

 

[TheDR4KE]

mm hmm

I know exactly what you mean

Drake

 

[perks]

Re: mm hmm

I know exactly what you mean

Drake

QuAAAAAAAAAACK!<puRRRR>

perky

 

[TheDR4KE]

... and so does she <points up>

Drake