WTH Why not shake things up with a HotWife story that has a sloppy seconds theme

[SebastianHolt]

Clearly, this will attract lots of attention from all the happy haters of the Hotwife/LW category, but would this also turn off women? My gut says yes; however, I think the raw, flagrant heading might attract some women. Of course, fiction has the advantage of being free from aids and STDs. My thought is we have a wife who isn't into sex, and she goes on this journey. She wants to find hot sex and is seeking lovers. Thinking she got married right after college and only had 2 to 3 lovers, who were not very skilled, nor could they last long. Anyway, so she finds two guys who are willing to try out a menage and other things. They are not gay nor bi, just horn dogs. They meet up, have some drinks, and get at it. The first dude comes pretty quickly due to being overly excited for his first hook up (and using something like Grinder [oh wait, is Grinder a bi sexual website?])

Anyway, my point is this ... the first guy doesn't last long, and as soon as he moves off the bed, dude #2 jumps on her.

Would love to hear from a woman who has had two men ... and when the second guy penetrates, what things go through her mind? What is she feeling? Is she comparing #1 dude's cock to #2? Does her body feel different after the first guy cums?

From the guys, has anyone been dude #2? How does it feel to penetrate a woman after a guy has come in her?

 

[lovecraft68]

 

[AwkwardlySet]

AI rejection threads, all is forgiven.

 

[onehitwanda]

I would imagine it's something like a bulldog trying to eat yoghurt.

 

[StillStunned]

Clearly, this will attract lots of attention from all the happy haters of the Hotwife/LW category, but would this also turn off women? My gut says yes; however, I think the raw, flagrant heading might attract some women. Of course, fiction has the advantage of being free from aids and STDs. My thought is we have a wife who isn't into sex, and she goes on this journey. She wants to find hot sex and is seeking lovers. Thinking she got married right after college and only had 2 to 3 lovers, who were not very skilled, nor could they last long. Anyway, so she finds two guys who are willing to try out a menage and other things. They are not gay nor bi, just horn dogs. They meet up, have some drinks, and get at it. The first dude comes pretty quickly due to being overly excited for his first hook up (and using something like Grinder [oh wait, is Grinder a bi sexual website?])

Anyway, my point is this ... the first guy doesn't last long, and as soon as he moves off the bed, dude #2 jumps on her.

Would love to hear from a woman who has had two men ... and when the second guy penetrates, what things go through her mind? What is she feeling? Is she comparing #1 dude's cock to #2? Does her body feel different after the first guy cums?

From the guys, has anyone been dude #2? How does it feel to penetrate a woman after a guy has come in her?

The great thing about being a writer is that you can write whatever you can imagine. The great thing about being a writer on Lit is that you can publish what you write.

If this is a story you want to write, dust off the old keyboard and start typing. Never experienced these things in real life? No problem. I've never been a love-sick troll, or ridden an eight-legged lizard, or betrayed humanity to a shapeshifting space vampire, or shagged my twin sister, or given a sexual massage to my school bully, or been shot by a vampire-hunting priest, or any of dozens of things I've described in my stories.

Use your imagination. Try to picture for yourself what it would be like, and then relate that to something that you have actually experienced. Identify a few elements or moments, and use those to hang your description on.

Even if you can't do that, you clearly want to write the scene. So write it, read it back, try to imagine it happening, and add all the details that would make it feel more real. Rinse and repeat. That's the essence of writing.

Good luck!

 

[MrPixel]

From the guys, has anyone been dude #2? How does it feel to penetrate a woman after a guy has come in her?

Not a reliable source here. She usually quickly douches afterwards before taking me.

Rinse and repeat.

Yeah, that's about right.

 

[EmilyMiller]

Are you planning on writing this, or do you just want people to talk about it?