WTH Why not shake things up with a HotWife story that has a sloppy seconds theme

[SebastianHolt]

Clearly, this will attract lots of attention from all the happy haters of the Hotwife/LW category, but would this also turn off women? My gut says yes; however, I think the raw, flagrant heading might attract some women. Of course, fiction has the advantage of being free from aids and STDs. My thought is we have a wife who isn't into sex, and she goes on this journey. She wants to find hot sex and is seeking lovers. Thinking she got married right after college and only had 2 to 3 lovers, who were not very skilled, nor could they last long. Anyway, so she finds two guys who are willing to try out a menage and other things. They are not gay nor bi, just horn dogs. They meet up, have some drinks, and get at it. The first dude comes pretty quickly due to being overly excited for his first hook up (and using something like Grinder [oh wait, is Grinder a bi sexual website?])

Anyway, my point is this ... the first guy doesn't last long, and as soon as he moves off the bed, dude #2 jumps on her.

Would love to hear from a woman who has had two men ... and when the second guy penetrates, what things go through her mind? What is she feeling? Is she comparing #1 dude's cock to #2? Does her body feel different after the first guy cums?

From the guys, has anyone been dude #2? How does it feel to penetrate a woman after a guy has come in her?

 

[lovecraft68]

 

[AwkwardlySet]

AI rejection threads, all is forgiven.

 

[onehitwanda]

I would imagine it's something like a bulldog trying to eat yoghurt.

 

[StillStunned]

Clearly, this will attract lots of attention from all the happy haters of the Hotwife/LW category, but would this also turn off women? My gut says yes; however, I think the raw, flagrant heading might attract some women. Of course, fiction has the advantage of being free from aids and STDs. My thought is we have a wife who isn't into sex, and she goes on this journey. She wants to find hot sex and is seeking lovers. Thinking she got married right after college and only had 2 to 3 lovers, who were not very skilled, nor could they last long. Anyway, so she finds two guys who are willing to try out a menage and other things. They are not gay nor bi, just horn dogs. They meet up, have some drinks, and get at it. The first dude comes pretty quickly due to being overly excited for his first hook up (and using something like Grinder [oh wait, is Grinder a bi sexual website?])

Anyway, my point is this ... the first guy doesn't last long, and as soon as he moves off the bed, dude #2 jumps on her.

Would love to hear from a woman who has had two men ... and when the second guy penetrates, what things go through her mind? What is she feeling? Is she comparing #1 dude's cock to #2? Does her body feel different after the first guy cums?

From the guys, has anyone been dude #2? How does it feel to penetrate a woman after a guy has come in her?

The great thing about being a writer is that you can write whatever you can imagine. The great thing about being a writer on Lit is that you can publish what you write.

If this is a story you want to write, dust off the old keyboard and start typing. Never experienced these things in real life? No problem. I've never been a love-sick troll, or ridden an eight-legged lizard, or betrayed humanity to a shapeshifting space vampire, or shagged my twin sister, or given a sexual massage to my school bully, or been shot by a vampire-hunting priest, or any of dozens of things I've described in my stories.

Use your imagination. Try to picture for yourself what it would be like, and then relate that to something that you have actually experienced. Identify a few elements or moments, and use those to hang your description on.

Even if you can't do that, you clearly want to write the scene. So write it, read it back, try to imagine it happening, and add all the details that would make it feel more real. Rinse and repeat. That's the essence of writing.

Good luck!

 

[MrPixel]

From the guys, has anyone been dude #2? How does it feel to penetrate a woman after a guy has come in her?

Not a reliable source here. She usually quickly douches afterwards before taking me.

Rinse and repeat.

Yeah, that's about right.

 

[EmilyMiller]

Are you planning on writing this, or do you just want people to talk about it?

 

[SimonDoom]

The most interesting part of this story is how you get from

we have a wife who isn't into sex

to

she goes on this journey. She wants to find hot sex and is seeking lovers

Figure that out and the rest will fall into place.

 

[Djmac1031]

My thought is we have a wife who isn't into sex, and she goes on this journey. She wants to find hot sex and is seeking lovers

The most interesting part of this story is how you get from



to



Figure that out and the rest will fall into place.

Yeah I'm with Simon in that you really need to figure out what story you want to tell, because your description sounds like two opposing ideas: a wife who "isn't into sex," and a who "wants to find hot sex" sounds like two different people to me.

 

[Lifestyle66]

Well, I can see it, with a wife who isn't into sex because it's boring. She decides she hasn't had much experience, and her girlfriends are telling her that the husband is apparently underendowed.

So, she's off to find out what she missed by not dating more.

As for the two guys, ... been there, both as the first and the second. The second guy finds it's VERY well lubricated and not as stimulating with less friction! As for the woman, they were just into it. One time, she was just so into what she was feeling, she barely noticed the tag-team change. and barely noticed the change.

 

[SilkyVine]

Would love to hear from a woman who has had two men ... and when the second guy penetrates, what things go through her mind? What is she feeling? Is she comparing #1 dude's cock to #2? Does her body feel different after the first guy cums?

From the guys, has anyone been dude #2? How does it feel to penetrate a woman after a guy has come in her?

Yes, I compare. If one guy cums in me (we don't do this alot) its the same as whenever my husband creampies me. Sometimes it feels 'wetter' sometimes it feels warmer. Sometimes I only feel him pulse and twitch etc.

For your second question; This is hard for me to explain but my husband said after our first threesome (he went second but I wasn't creampied) that it was similar to when we have sex for a bit then switch to something else (e.g oral) then go back to sex. For example when we first have sex he has to go a little slower etc until I can accommodate him but since our friend got that part out of the way he could "jump straight in at full power". He also said i felt a lot warmer inside after his friend had been inside me first.

Hope this helps!

 

[SimonDoom]

As for the two guys, ... been there, both as the first and the second. The second guy finds it's VERY well lubricated and not as stimulating with less friction! As for the woman, they were just into it. One time, she was just so into what she was feeling, she barely noticed the tag-team change. and barely noticed the change.

Seems like it would make sense for the bigger man to go second.

I'm not speaking from experience.

 

[APilgrimSquare]

The great thing about being a writer is that you can write whatever you can imagine. The great thing about being a writer on Lit is that you can publish what you write.

PREACH!!

 

[Britva415]

WTH Why not shake things up with a HotWife story that has a sloppy seconds theme

WTH why not

Is this something you're considering writing? Or is this more like what we see in the Story Ideas (seeking a writer) forum?

Anyway, it doesn't have to go in the LW category. It might still attract negative attention from those people but you don't have to lead with the chin by putting it there.

 

[dream_yahoozie]

I kinda had a similar thought about this kinda thing earlier.

It was a swinger party at a hotel or other such place with lots of private rooms. During the partying before when everyone is socializing, all the ladies get assigned a color. That's the room they stay in.

Then all the men get a color, that's the room they start in. Everyone gets Viagra so they stay nice and hard. After the initial coupling, the ladies stay in their rooms and the men go around and fuck whoever they fancy till the party is over or everyone is tired.

Kinda sloppy seconds-ish